Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

Express Yourself [Poetry Thread]

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

RE: The Official Poetry thread

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

Sry! lol. I'll remember that next time! I promise! =]

throne of lies

So I took a look at this old Picture of us.
I had on my Fake smile and those old scetchers.
You were by my side, smiling.
We were throwing that old ratty Softball in our stiff new gloves.

And today, as you sit on your throne made out of Lies,
looking down at us,
I realize something.
As I stand hand in hand with my Real friends,
They've never once Looked Up to You.

So I take a look at this old picture of us,
and know,
that I'm better off Without You.

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

Oh! I got one! It's pretty long though:

Loving this feeling
I never saw it coming
I tought we were just friends
But somehow I was wrong
I remember the days
That we spent together
You said I was different
But in a kindly way
Yet I always tought
That you loved her
She's much prettier
Much smarter
But now you're with me
And we watch the stars
Our tails entwined
Our hearts beating at once
Who knew it could happen?
No one,that's who
Your eyes glimmered
Your pelt swayed to the wind
It gave me shivers
It made me melt
I remember the days
When I said to myself
'He'll never love me,
I don't deserve him'
Yet somehow I was wrong
In the day we would play
At night we would stray
Away from our homes
To splash through the waves
From the blue water
We fought side by side
When a threat came to us
I found out about my true self
It pained me so much
But you held me close
You healed my heart
I never saw it coming
But know I'm loving this feeling

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

Ooh! I loved it Starcloud! =]

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

Why thank you! It's actually my first poem ever! <3

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

                              Replay
                     By the one and only B

    && So she walks down the halway like a prep.
                      Books to her chest,
           Another tired face among a hundred.

             His laugh is heard above all others.
       His crooked smile shows through the croud.

          He passes her to get to his next class.
                           She smiles.
                        He smiles back.
                     She breaths in deep,
                    Savoring the moment,
                    Hoping he'll talk to her.

                       But she looks back.
  His shape disapearing behind the crowd again.

                   She sighs and walks on.
                     "Maybe tomarrow..."
                She tells herself yet again.

              But tomarrow is like pressing
                            Rewind <<
                                and
                               Play >

_So I'm crushing... Have you guessed?_

-- Edited by Bubbleshine at 02:13, 2008-05-29

-- Edited by Bubbleshine at 02:13, 2008-05-29

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

Aww,'tis so sad. :( I'm here for ya,Bubbly.
Me gots another one! :D

The White Night,By yours truly

The White Night
So bright
Shall it be
Yet so dark
No one can see
Love blooms
In this moment
Take your time
As we watch Silverpelt
Light twinkles
In their eyes
As Night lays
Upon the skies
The stars shine brilliantly
Leading many to eternity
The White Night
May it be
The most beautiful night
We will ever see

I know it's short,but this is all I could think of.
Can you guess what it's about? ;D

Twinklepaw · WindClan Apprentice

can we post things that are like songs, since they can be sorta considered as poetry? :)

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

I think you can,but you'll have to PM Bubbly 'bout that.

-- Edited by Starcloud at 12:04, 2008-06-01