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Across the mountains---chapter one


Long ago, there lived a spirit wolf. The green eyed wolf named Caleb. Some believe this wolf still live on the earth. Others believe its powers and itself are all just a story wolves tolf their pups. But soon, everyone will know if this spirit is true or not.


Okay, so i thought it would be cool if i made a story/comic. The first chapter will be a story and the second with be a comic page and etc.

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-- Edited by Fireheart on Saturday 18th of April 2009 10:01:13 PM

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The snow pressed against our pelts as we slowly walked around the empty area. Everything covered with snow. Weve been traveling this frosty land for days now. Theres neither food nor Un-frozen water out here.

Maccon, what if the pups come while were here? A beautiful white gold wolf said, her golden eyes staring at the black wolf next to her.

Dont worry, Ayame. Maccon replied in his usual calm voice. We will get out of here before the pups are born. Maccon looked ahead, hoping he was actually right about that. Ayame nodded gently and watched the frosty ground below her. I hope so, She whispered.

Maccon ran forward and called to Ayame, Stay there! Im going to find a place to rest! Ill be right back! Ayame watched as he left and she slowly sat down with a small yawn. She turned her head to the left when she saw a green light out of the corner of her eye. She slowly stood up and tilted her head as she watched the light. Slowly, she began to walk towards it.

Maccon ran back to where Ayame was. I found a cave that-He stopped and looked around. Ayame? He barked. He didnt see her anywhere. He turned the direction she walked off to and saw the green light as well. What the He slowly began to walk to it. Maybe she went this way.

Maccon! Come quick! Ayame called as she could see him in the distance. She was standing next to a pup. The pup had a beautiful blue pelt and his eyes.His eyes were green. Maccons ears perked up when he heard his mates voice not far away. He quickened his pace until he saw her by the pup. The green light also disappeared.

Maccon, this pup, its all alone. She said. She looked down at the pup. Ive never seen a pup with green eyes before. Maccon looked at the pup. What do you want to do with it? He asked. Take it with us. Was her reply.

Maccon stared  at ayame and then glanced down at the small pup. Really? He said. What if his parents are looking for him? Ayame rolled her eyes.  Maccon, look at where we are. We are probably the only life here. We havent seen any other wolves are animals at all since we got out here. Maccon took a deep breath and stared down at the snow. Finally, he replied. Okay,

Hours past by as we walked through the snowy land. Maccon and ayame were getting worried about the pups and their own pups that would soon be coming. Maccon looked ahead and saw a figure. Round, and also bumpy looking. As they got closer, it looked bigger and grayer. Finally, Maccon realized It was a cave. He sighed with relief and gently grabbed the tired pup in his jaws. They arrived and the cave and walked in. It was big. No, not big. Huge. Maccon set the now sleeping pup gently down on the ground and he looked over at ayame. He stuck his muzzle in the air and took a small sniff. Smells safe, He said, and sat down. Please rest now, ayame. You need the strength. Ayame gave a big smile as she laid down on her side on the ground. She yawned and closed her eyes.

Maccon laid down as he stared at the strange pup next to him. where did you come from He thought as he closed his eyes.



-- Edited by Fireheart on Saturday 18th of April 2009 10:01:41 PM

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I know, tis chapter short :p...

The snow pressed against our pelts as we slowly walked around the empty area. Everything covered with snow. Weve been traveling this frosty land for days now. Theres neither food nor Un-frozen water out here.

Maccon, what if the pups come while were here? A beautiful white gold wolf said, her golden eyes staring at the black wolf next to her.

Dont worry, Ayame. Maccon replied in his usual calm voice. We will get out of here before the pups are born. Maccon looked ahead, hoping he was actually right about that. Ayame nodded gently and watched the frosty ground below her. I hope so, She whispered.

Maccon ran forward and called to Ayame, Stay there! Im going to find a place to rest! Ill be right back! Ayame watched as he left and she slowly sat down with a small yawn. She turned her head to the left when she saw a green light out of the corner of her eye. She slowly stood up and tilted her head as she watched the light. Slowly, she began to walk towards it.

Maccon ran back to where Ayame was. I found a cave that-He stopped and looked around. Ayame? He barked. He didnt see her anywhere. He turned the direction she walked off to and saw the green light as well. What the He slowly began to walk to it. Maybe she went this way.

Maccon! Come quick! Ayame called as she could see him in the distance. She was standing next to a pup. The pup had a beautiful blue pelt and his eyes.His eyes were green. Maccons ears perked up when he heard his mates voice not far away. He quickened his pace until he saw her by the pup. The green light also disappeared.

Maccon, this pup, its all alone. She said. She looked down at the pup. Ive never seen a pup with green eyes before. Maccon looked at the pup. What do you want to do with it? He asked. Take it with us. Was her reply.

Maccon stared  at ayame and then glanced down at the small pup. Really? He said. What if his parents are looking for him? Ayame rolled her eyes.  Maccon, look at where we are. We are probably the only life here. We havent seen any other wolves are animals at all since we got out here. Maccon took a deep breath and stared down at the snow. Finally, he replied. Okay,

Hours past by as we walked through the snowy land. Maccon and ayame were getting worried about the pups and their own pups that would soon be coming. Maccon looked ahead and saw a figure. Round, and also bumpy looking. As they got closer, it looked bigger and grayer. Finally, Maccon realized It was a cave. He sighed with relief and gently grabbed the tired pup in his jaws. They arrived and the cave and walked in. It was big. No, not big. Huge. Maccon set the now sleeping pup gently down on the ground and he looked over at ayame. He stuck his muzzle in the air and took a small sniff. Smells safe, He said, and sat down. Please rest now, ayame. You need the strength. Ayame gave a big smile as she laid down on her side on the ground. She yawned and closed her eyes.

Maccon laid down as he stared at the strange pup next to him. where did you come from He thought as he closed his eyes.



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