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RE: What if? Stories-Post suggestions for next story!


that was cool!!!!

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If her vlan would of found out and said she couldn't keep them and she ran away with Oakheart

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Shadowpaw's What If?
Question: What if Spottedleaf was still alive, and helped Tigerclaw take over ThunderClan because she had formed a crush on him?
Point of view: Tigerclaw's

Tigerclaw woke up and yawned. The past moon, he'd secretly planned with Spottedleaf on how to take over ThunderClan. In the process of planning, they had promised to become mates if it worked out. Today was the day that all of their planning and hard work paid off. He'd play the honorable deputy, and his rogue followers would burst into the camp at sunhigh. They'd kill off several of the disloyal warriors and apprentices, like that kittypet Fireheart... He padded out of the Warrior's Den and decided he needed energy, so he went to the fresh-kill pile.
After he was full of magpie meat, he looked to the sky. Almost time. He took his place in front of the HighRock where he usually spoke to Bluestar or watched the camp. Time. Rogues burst into the camp, and then there was a mix of rogue pelts and warrior and apprentice pelts within a minute. He searched for Bluestar's familliar blue-ish grey fur. Found it.
He tackled Bluestar and pinned her down with his massive paws, unseathing his claws on her shoulders, drawing some blood. "If you have 4 lives as you've told me, I'll end them. This is for not recognizing that my love for you still exists!!!" he sobbed.
To his amazement, when he finished her off, she stayed down, never to walk again.
Several words exited Bluestar's mouth on her way to StarClan. "Tigerclaw... you traitor... I used to love you as well, but... now... I hope that Fireheart kills you... Fire WILL save this Clan."
It turned out that Fireheart had survived, to his amazement. He'd criticized him for killing Bluestar. He said it wasn't true, and he'd just been there to defend her. All of his loyal warriors backed him up, and Fireheart silenced, his head bowed in defeat. Tigerclaw liked this.
The next day Tigerclaw became Tigerstar, and he'd gained his nine lives from StarClan cats that saw him as an honorable leader.
Within the next year, Tigerstar was a name to be feared. He lead both ThunderClan and ShadowClan. Tawnystar took his commands and used them to lead ShadowClan for Tigerstar. They secretly met to discuss plans at Fourtrees once every ten days. Spottedleaf was his deputy, and his mate. They had three kits, which were Tigerstar's third litter of kits that were somehow related to him. Goldenflower had been killed by a fox.
One night, they were discovered by that kittypet, Fireheart, when Tawnystar and Tigerstar were meeting. "Tigerstar! Tonight I prove that you are a traitor!!!" Fireheart hissed, jumping onto Tigerstar's back. Little did Fireheart know that he only had five lives left. He felt a large pain in the back of his neck. His neck became wet, and then his sight went black. He saw Bluestar in front of him. "Fire will save the Clan, Tigerstar. Now the prophecy is being completed. I am forced to heal you, because you were given nine lives, but I know that Fireheart will kill you..."
Tigerstar was healed, and sent back to the fight. Fireheart was several feet away. Tawnystar had fled. He stood up, and looked at Fireheart. "Pretty good, kittypet. But not good enough. You might as well go back to your Twolegs where you belong."
Fireheart and Tigerstar scrabbled around a while more. Fireheart was the last cat standing, and Tigerstar was dead.
(Changing to Fireheart's point of view)
The battle at FourTrees was now a distant memory. Spottedleaf had not wanted to become leader, so Fireheart took her place. Firestar now lead ThunderClan, and Spottedleaf was his Deputy. They didn't have any kits, but Sandstorm had given birth to three kits that looked like they were related to Firestar.

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RiverClan Warrior

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Bubbleshine's What if?
Question: What if Brambleclaw had killed Firestar with the foxtrap?
Point of veiw: Brambleclaw

   "Do it!" Hawkfrost hissed in his ear. Brambleclaw took one last look at his helpless leader. He rested a paw on the trap, and the other on his leader's neck.
   "This is for my father." He pushed and closed his eyes tight. A horrible gurgling noise came, and his paws were wet with blood. Hawkfrost looked at him with bright eyes.
   "We will furfill our father's dream." Brambleclaw smiled. He rushed to the water to wash his paws, and Hawkfrost left. The water turned black as if in discust. Bramleclaw took one last look at his former leader. He dug the foxtrap out of the ground, and took the pitiful looking cat by the scruff. 
   Brambleclaw watched the stunned cats in the clearing as he dragged the leader into the center of camp. Cats surrounded him, not needing to ask how Firestar died. Sandstorm and Leafpool cried togeather, not looking at the body. Squirrelflight suddenly ran through the entrance, Cloudtail at her side. She ran over to Brambleclaw.
   "Daddy," She collapsed at his feet. Brambleclaw lowered himself to her level.
   All of the clan sat vigil that night. Brambleclaw looked at the clan that surrounded him. Who would be his deputy? Ashfur would be a bad choice. he had no respect for him. Brackenfur trusted him enough... Yes, it would have to be Brackenfur.
   "Let's go." Leafpool came to Brambleclaw. He nodded through his fake tears. They traveled to Moonpool right then. He licked the water and fell asleep.
   Brambleclaw opened his eyes, and he was still at the Moonpool. Exept he was alone. A she-cat with blur fur appreared in front of him.
   "Hello Bluestar." Brambleclaw greeted. She looked at him as though he was crowfood. A ginger pelt flickered in the water. Brambleclaw looked up and saw Firestar.
   "You won't be recieving your nine lives from Starclan, traitor." Bluestar spat. She lashed a claw at him. getting a good chunk out of his ear.
   He woke up by the Moonpool.
   "Everything go well?" Leafpool asked from behind him.
   "Fine," Bramblestar mewed, feeling his V-slit ear, "Perfectly fine."

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I'll work on yours, Bubbleshine! And those were both great!

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What if the cats never got a chance to leave the forest, and the twolegs destroyed the forrest with them there?

   Firestar awoke, a roaring in his ears. Am I dreaming? he thought. He padded out of his den, and the stench of a monster filled his nose. This wasn't just any Thunderpath monster, though, this was a Treecutplace monster! The kind that eats the forest in its path! Firestar rushed out of camp and onto Highrock. He summoned the camp, and struggled for what to say, what to do. He had feared this day would come, but should have left faster. As the Clan gathered beneath him, he began speaking.
  "We must try to escape!" He began. "Noone will get left behind. Queens, gather your kits, and stick together. Elders, group near them. Apprentices, you too, and Warriors, you form a circle around the whole camp. Hurry! I'll be at the front, and give you the signal as soon as you're all ready."
   He leaped down and ran to the front of the line of cats that was quickly gathering. When all cat stood anxiously behind him, he twitched his tail and padded forward hurriedly, but trying to keep a good pace for the queens, carrying their kits, and the elders to keep up. The roars grew louder, and Firestar tried his best to veer far away from it.  This monster must have come from it's camp, Treecutplace.  He was heading toward Barley's farm, past WindClan and near another Twolegplace, past RiverClan. As the roaring still grew louder and louder, he began to run faster, and an elder fell. Firestar ran back and helped push him up, but he was weak and wouldn't be able to run as fast as Firestar hoped. They padded forward hurriedly again, but the roaring grew unbareable. The monster pounced out of the trees. Firestar tried to bound forward, but wasn't fast enough for this huge, fast monster. 
  Out of the corner of his eye, Firestar saw about half of ThunderClan run away, and as he was about to, the monster, running straight toward all of them waiting for freshkill, attacked the cats.


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very nice:3

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Oooh. Dun dun DUUUUUNNNNN!!!!!!!!

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Thanks everyone! I couldn't bring myself to flat out saying, "and the cats died." So i said it in a different way. A way that was like the cats' point of view, since they think "monsters" want cats to stock up their freshkill piles or something. :P

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ur welcomed:B

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