Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

RE: Express Yourself [Poetry Thread]

Freeflare · Loner

thx Em, i like yours 2

Florestadream · RiverClan Warrior

Come Home
By Vally

"Come, home, come home!"
The little girl cried.
Her eyes were crying tears,
Her hands were balled up fists.

Come home, come home,
My brave little soldier,
I love you,
I love you,
My brave little soldier,

"I wish, I wish,"
Said the brave soldier,
His eyes sad and lonely,
His smile brave and strong.

Come home, come home,
My brave little soldier,
I love you,
I love you,
My brave little soldier.

[ This is short because this was quick, and made for my friend, whose parent is in war. ]

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

o:
Ara, Vally-san, ketsu genni fureru ware!
lD *show-off*

Anyways...
Vally-san, write, write, write!
Though it was quick and short, I loved it alot. I'm sure you pretty much generalized every child who's parents left to go to war's feelings.
Tell your friend I feel sorry for her. :(

Florestadream · RiverClan Warrior

Yeah, and in school we did a drive for the troops and we raised over 2,000 US dollars!

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Well poems, I'm not good...

Good bye friend

Memories
linger in thought
Love
still warms the heart
Joy
connects the past
Tears
blur the present
Faith
promises reunion in the future

Onyxfeather · ShadowClan Warrior

Well here is my poem.... It doesnt have a name yet

Thinking. Can't stop thinking.
Think of you. This. That. That Life. That day.
That dream was mine.
A utopian dream.

Your aura; struck me like lightning to a tree.
Pointy, like a star, you shone.
So bright, yet not shining as a star would,
But as apparent as white chalk on a blackboard.
You would not show off like a star.
Yet you did burn so hot, so fiercely, so explosively -
you were a star in my eyes.

But like all stars, you died.
That gas was gone.
No pull between us.
The atmosphere was dry
and I began to choke.
I was taken from my star - like a child being taken from its poor,
drunken mother - I did not know what was happening.
Dazed. Confused. Without true reality, I there sat.
Wondering.

The end of my world had only just begun, with yours beginning

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

That's amaising, Dawnbreak.

Onyxfeather · ShadowClan Warrior

Thank you!!!!

Shatterstep · ShadowClan Medicine Cat

ONCE AGAIN

Once again
You fall for you him
No apparent reason
No apparent theory
You see him
You think why cant I have that
Once Again
You fall more and more madly in love with him
Enough
He will just leave you
Once Again
You believe him
He says wait
We can make this work
Just wait a little longer but you know
You will end up how you were before
Hurt
Upset
Used
Once Again
He kisses you
You fall for it
Again
Again
Again
Then it happens
Once again

My first poem