Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Beautiful; Lily! I can really feel the passion in your poem!
And everyone; I enjoy constructive critisism for some odd reason...
I get it a lot, so I've grown to actually like it.
I'm an odd person; you know?
( And dense... )

[ [ Please do not copy/steal this poem.
Poem (c) to Vally ] ]

Forever
By Vally

I push, I pull,
I scream, I shake.
The Earth, it wakes,
My Time, it stops.

Forever, am I bound to this night;
The night that all my pain has created a rift;
A rift that tears me apart?

I pushed, I pulled,
I screamed to stay awake.
The Earth, I shook me,
Screaming,
"Stay awake! Stay Awake!"

I could've sworn it was his voice;
Gruff and full of tied up emotions,
Sweet and musical,
All at once.

But I pushed, and I pulled,
I screamed for you to come,
But the Earth became still and let me go,
Leaving me to say,
"I'm awake,
I'm awake."

A jolt, a warmth,
I never would've believed it.
Yet here I am,
Living proof,
That forever doesn't exist.

The pushing, the pulling,
The screaming,
The Earth.

You stare at me like I'm crazy,
Yet all I can do,
Is smile and say,

"I'm who I am,
No harm in that.
I'm ditzy,
I'm stupid,
I'll never be in love."

And yet you pulled me, and pushed me,
Trying to tell me,
Without screaming,
Without the Earth shaking,

"I love you,
I love,
Don't ever leave my side."

But I couldn't hear you,
My heart in pieces,
My mind broken.
And I never knew,
That you loved me.

I never knew that all the Pushing and pulling,
All the screaming and shaking,
All the Earth and all the music,
Was you saying you loved me,
You loved me.

And yet forever together was a lie to us both,
And the saying,
"It is better to have loved and lost,
Then to have never loved,"
Was a broken truth.
And we would never know, until we were apart...

That you loved me,
And I loved you,
And our love was not to be forever requited.
It was to forever break our hearts.


Story Behind This Poem :

Well, I liked this guy and he liked me, but we never knew, and I broke my heart that the whole time, I was oblivious to his flirting, and I probably hurt him more than it hurt me to have never known. And now we don't go to the same school. So I thought I'd write about it... I hope you guys liked it!  :3

Omigawsh, I feel so spedcial right now! Thank you so much for the complement, Shadowstorm! That was so nice of you to say that--I can't believe it was that good!

No
Absolutely not
You can't go stomping around crying at every comment
You can't take everything I say the wrong way

Yes
Of Course
You feel like I'm mean to you again
You express that I'm the bad guy

Maybe
It's not your fault
I've been under alot of stress
You two are the last hope that breaks

Maybe
It's all your fault
You blame it all on me
You think you should be strong enough to stand up to me

You shouldn't have to stand up to me
We both have our rights and wrongs,
And that's no reason to get us both in trouble.

If you go crying to mommy every time,
That's not stand ing up to me.
Standing up to me, is expressing what your problem is,
and resolving it.

There is no reason you need your mommy's help,
Because that leaves us both punished in the end.

So you tell me why you're crying all the time,
And I just might tell you why I bottle everything up inside.




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This is a poem I just wrote to get the anger out about my brothers. The one closest to age to me in particular.

@Shadow: Well, how 'bout this? I'm free for suggestions; and I'd love if you could suggest some. I've gone through everything. My boyfriend and I broke up like two months ago though. xD I was the one who did it though.

@Nighter: BEAUTIFUL, DARLIN', BEU-TEE-FULL!!! xD But seriously, I loved this one, and I can totally relate; I like a guy, too. The poem Forever is from las year, yet for some reason, it's dear in my heart; that guy will never go away...