Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Flight:
Psh. Dude, I shouldnt be the one trying to publish a book...

Dont you DARE say "I am not that good"

I hate that. }:[ xD

It's not only what the characters do...it's the WAY you make them do it. Especially the descriptions of their expressions, eyes, voices...and other things. I dunno. It's amazing though, that's what I do know.

-- Edited by Duskstar at 03:11, 2008-09-06

Hehehe!!! XD Dont worry Goldy! The next part will be up soon enough =D I be working on a whole bunch of stuff at the moment but as soon as i get that done i will work on this again =D

0.o Wow i guess i had better hurry then! XD *Rushes off to finish things before starting work on this again.

Here is Chapter 6 guys!! It is kindah long but i like it I hope you do too! XD

Falcondance stared wide mouthed as Silverstar finished what she had to say. Fireheart nodded his head slightly and gave a weary sigh. "Sounds like that prophecy may only end in sadness." He glanced up at Silverstar once more. "You are sure that those are the exact words that Darkstar told you?" The flame-colored toms green eyes were serious and yet very interested. Silverstar gave him a harsh look but Fireheart didnt seem to notice it. He merely had a large smile plastered on his face.

Falcondance merely shook his head slightly. "What are we going to do? There are going to be two deaths!" His voice grew almost desperate. I"t didnt say who was going to die!" His composure was lost as he thought about the four young apprentices that Starclan had sent. "They are so young..."

"Oh stop it Falcondance." He heard Silverstars harsh scold. "If Starclan didnt believe that they could succeed they would have sent others." She turned her gray eyes toward the brightening sky. "No, I believe that Starclan sent them because they are the only ones who can do this. Anyone else would fail." Falcondance admired the strong faith this young cat had in her ancestors. He nodded slightly at her wise words and stood taller.

"You are right..." He murmured, "I need more faith." Firehearts excited gaze turned to them. Falcondance thought that this medicine cat was taking in to much fun from this deadly prophecy.

"What?" The tom mewed to his deputy. Falcondance shook his head slightly. A deep voice sounded from outside the small den they were in.

"So is it okay for old friends to enter the den now?" Falcondance recognized the playful mew of Ivoryclaw. The large warriors head peeked in and Silverstars eyes blazed, yet not completely angry.

"Only if those friends are dying and absolutely need to know what is going on." The pale leader sneered. Ivoryclaws eyes looked up in thought for a moment.

"I think I meet all those requirements." He chuckled slightly at Silverstar. She rolled her eyes playfully. She didnt look back at the tom and Falcondance saw that Ivoryclaws eyes seemed to desperately beckon hers to turn back to him. He sighed softly and stood.

"I must be off then. This clan doesnt run itself." Ivoryclaw turned a curious gaze to the gray tom as if he just noticed that there were other cats in the den besides Silverstar. Falcondance pushed passed him and flicked his tail to beckon Fireheart. The flamed colored tom hopped up and followed him. Once they were out of the den he turned a glance over his shoulder to see Ivoryclaw quickly enter the den. Just barely audible voices drifted from the den. Falcondance strained to listen.

"Whats wrong?" came the hushed whisper of Ivoryclaw.

"What does it matter?" He knew that voice as Silverstar.

"I am just worried is that so wrong?" There was a slight pause after that and what sounded like a sigh.

"No its not wrong its just..." the voice trailed off. The sound of shuffling paws were so soft Falcondance was unsure of what it was.

"Didnt I tell you a long time ago that its okay to lean on me? I am here for you. You can show me your weak side." The white toms voice was passionate and low. "You know why I care so much..." As the voice grew softer Falcondance was unsure if he should be listening to this conversation any longer. He turned and padded toward the rest of the camp. An angry hiss sounded from the direction of the den and Falcondance turned his head to see a very angry Ivoryclaw bounding out of the den. His large paws sent tremors in the soft soil as he purposely took his anger out on the ground. His long white claws dug in to the Earth deeply.

Falcondance gasped slightly. What important part of the conversation did he miss? He knew what he had missed. There was only one thing the white warrior wanted from their leader and with that expression, Falcondance knew he hadnt gotten what he wanted. He shook his head slightly and turned from the angry tom to face the clan again. "Since when did things get to complicated?" He murmured.

"Well, as soon as apprenticeship ends the real deals of the world really hit you." Came a warm voice. Falcondance nearly jumped out of his skin as he turned his pale green eyes to see Moonshine giving him a sympathetic glance. Falcondance nodded slightly embarrassed. He felt like an idiot for talking out loud like that. "Dont worry, you are doing a great job as the deputy." She smiled at him and Falcondance felt his troubles being taken away.

"Thanks," he murmured. He felt tiny paw grab on to his back trying to push him over.

"We got you Falcondance!" Came tiny voices squealing in joy. The gray deputy laughed and fell over.

"Oh my! Such strong young kits!" He purred happily seeing the overjoyed faces of Rustkit and Twigkit. Falcondance rolled on to his back and the young kits jumped on his soft stomach.

"You can bet we will be the best warriors this clan has ever seen!" Twigkit squeaked.

"No we will be the best warriors there has ever been ever!" Rustkit squeaked louder. Twigkit sent her a mischievous glance and growled softly.

"Yeah? Well you will have to prove you can beat me because there can be only one legendary warrior!" The young brown kits white tail lashed back and forth. Rustkit crouched down on Falcondance as well and sprang forward. The two rambunctious kits laughed as the rolled away. Falcondance gave out a loud joyful laugh.

"What energetic kits!" he purred.

"You handle them so well," Moonshine almost sad voice rang in his ears.

Falcondance turned his pale eyes to her as he turned over. "Gingerheart would be proud of them." He murmured. Moonshines sad eyes turned to him for a moment then away again. Falcondance felt helpless. He wanted to comfort her but what should he do? A few kind words wouldnt be enough. He sat up and gave her a long stare. When her eyes met back with his he gave her a smile. "Honestly, you have done a wonderful job Moonshine. No queen could do a better job."

The silver she-cats mouth pulled in to a tired smile. "You are just trying to comfort me." She murmured. "Thanks for the kind words." She turned her head and Falcondance was at a loss for words. The strong she cat wasnt the type to dwell on such bad emotions. He stood and padded forward slightly. He reached his nose forward and touched it to her cheek.

"Please dont be sad." He murmured and pulled away. The pretty she-cats eyes were fill with tears as she turned to him. He lifted a paw and wiped them away. "The tears just dont look right in your beautiful eyes." He smiled again trying to cheer her up.

No one has called my eyes beautiful since Gingerheart died. She sighed and more tears sprang from her eyes.

"How could anyone describe them otherwise?" He murmured in to her ear. She turned her sad eyes and locked them on to his pale green ones.
            "Thank you Falcondance," She smiled slightly and touched her nose to his. Falcondance felt to soft nudges in his side as he pulled away from Moonshine. Two puzzled faces stared up at him. Their green eyes were questioning.

"Are you going to be our daddy Falcondance?" Rustkit asked. The gray deputy was slightly taken aback by the question.

"You like Mommy right?" Twigkit piped in. His mouth hung open and he felt heat rise in his cheeks.

"You touched Mommys nose with yours. Skyleaf does that to Rainpelt. He says he does that because he loves her. Does that mean you love Mommy?" Rustkit added. Falcondance stared wide-eyed down at each young kit. He was at a loss for words. How was he going to explain this?

"Uh..." He started dumbly. The young kits stared up at him almost pleadingly. He turned his pale eyes to Moonshine begging her to help out, yet she was staring wide-eyed at the kits as well.

"Of course he doesnt love Moonshine," Came the harsh young voice of Rainpelts son Shadowkit. The four cats turned their eyes to the young black tom. He gave each of them a long bored looks. Falcondance clamped his mouth shut and glared at the young tom.

"And who says I dont love her?" Only then did he realize what he had just said. He felt Moonshines blue gaze on him but he didnt look at her.

"Really? Well then prove it." Shadowkit challenged.

"I also didnt say I did love her." He growled.

"Well make up your mind! Do you love her or not?" The young tom growled back.

"Its complicated." Falcondance hissed.

"No its not!" Shadowkit stood making his pelt bristle. "You either love her or you dont."

Falcondance couldnt believe he was having this kind of an argument in the middle of the makeshift camp and with Shadowkit to boot. "I dont have to justify myself to you." He growled back

Shadowkit gave him a glance of triumph, "Thats just a way of saying you cant come up with a good comeback!"

"Shadowkit! That is your deputy you are arguing with!" Falcondance turned his blazing eyes to see a large handsome blue-gray tom glaring at the young black tom. It was Shadowkits father Skyleaf. Falcondance stood up straighter and almost glared at the tom. Skyleaf turned a somewhat apologetic glance to his deputy. "Please dont mind him." He mewed softly.

             Falcondance nodded softly and turned away. His eyes met Moonshines eyes for an awkward moment. Her eyes were wide with shock and her face was embarrassed at what he had said. Falcondance frowned and stormed off. He couldnt believe what just happened. He turned a glance over his shoulder to Moonshine staring at him with her mouth open as if she wanted to say something. Falcondance sighed and kept going.

-- Edited by Ebonycloud at 21:56, 2008-10-13