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TOPIC: Fireclan: Ebonypaw's Quest ~After a long wait Part 14 is UP!!~


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         Falcondance sighed harshly as once again he was sent on a patrol around the territory. They had been searching nonstop for the past two days for Ebonypaw, Goldpaw, Duskpaw and Eaglepaw. There wasnt a single trace of them left. Flanking Falcondance was a jet black she cat with silver swirls on her front leg named Shatterstep, and Shadowkits father, Skyleaf. The large gray tom had a distracted look on his face. Falcondance turned a curious glance to him.

            "Whats wrong Skyleaf?" the deputy asked. The gray tom glanced up at him in slight surprise before he shook his head.

            "Why nothing of course," He was obviously lying. Falcondance narrowed his eyes.

            "Come on Skyleaf you cant fool me," Came Falcondances reply.

            "Well" he started. "it should be about time for Shadowkits ceremony" The tom looked a slight bit worried.

            "Dont worry," Shatterstep chimed in. "Silverstar will have his ceremony soon enough." Falcondance knew the gray warrior was worried that his son wouldnt have the right to be an apprentice since the young black toms father had been a rogue at one point. Yet he had settled down with Fireclan when he and Rainpelt found out they were going to have a kit.

            "Yeah, dont worry so much Skyleaf. Everything will be fine." Falcondance made a large grin at the other tom. Skyleaf returned a soft smirk to him as they set out to finish their patrol.

            "All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather beneath the rocky ledge for a clan meeting." Silverstars call rang around the side of the rocky hill that bordered the river. It made up the temporary camp for the time being. Falcondance stared up curiously at Silverstar. What could she want now? She couldnt be organizing a patrol this way. She stared down with pride at her clan. Out of the corner of his pale eyes Falcondance caught sight of Ivoryclaw. He stared uncomfortably up at Silverstar. Obviously they were still on awkward terms after their last fight.

            Oddly enough Rainpelt had Shadowkit groom rather well as they sat at the edge of the crowd. The queen was glowing with pride and Falcondance caught sight of Skyleaf nearby doing the same. Falcondance wondered if they had talked to Silverstar about the apprenticeship. He smiled to himself as the young black tom stared up at their leader with a mixture of anxiety, pride and the usual grumpy frown spread on his face.

            "As you all know four of our apprentices have gone missing. We need every warrior we have to look for them. But in order to have warriors, we need apprentices. And to have apprentices we need to promote our eldest kit to be one. Shadowkit step forward," She commanded the young tom. He eagerly left his mothers side and stopped at the base of the small rock ledge. Silverstar easily glided down from the top and stood before the young black tom. "From this day forward, until he had earned his warrior name, this apprentice shall be known as Shadowpaw." A proud grin spread on the young cats face. He turned his deep blue eyes to look about the clearing, trying to spot his mentor in the crowd of faces.

            Silverstars pale gaze turned to Falcondance and the gray tom was wondering if she was trying to get reassurance. The deputy smiled broadly as she continued, "Falcondance, you have no apprentice at this time and you are ready for a new one. You will begin Shadowpaws training." Falcondances smile fell away. What!? He shouted in his head. Shadowpaw didnt look to happy about this either. Rather his face held a glare at his new mentor. Silverstar fixed Falcondance with a harsh glare, "Falcondance you have devoted yourself to this clan and you are a much respected deputy. I expect you to pass on everything you know to this apprentice."

            The gray deputy stood and padded grudgingly forward to touch his nose to Shadowpaws. The black tom looked like he would rather be grooming a badger. Still they touched noses and padded to the edge of the clearing. Shadowpaw sat quite a bit a distance from his new mentor, almost as if telling him there was no way that this was going to work. Falcondance couldnt agree more.

            Silverstar gave a yowl signaling the end of the meeting. Immediately Falcondance rose and padded to Silverstar. The white she cat caught sight of him and her gaze turned cold. Yet Falcondance wasnt going to just go along with this. "Silverstar I need to speak with you." Silverstar didnt reply she merely just turned her head away. "Why did you make me Shadowpaws mentor? Shatterstep still hasnt had her first apprentice yet."

            "That is the exact reason that you are his mentor." She growled at him. "We have no time to fool around with having a new mentor on our hands. Rockfall, Nightbreeze, Hawkstripe and Ivoryclaw all already have apprentices. Shatterstep is new to mentoring, he cant be trained by his own parents and I am very busy." She sounded weary of talking to him.

            "But," Falcondance began but Silverstar flicked him in the mouth with her tail.

            "I will hear no more arguments. What I have said is final." She turned on her heal and bounded toward her den. A slight groan came from somewhere behind him and Falcondance knew who it was.

            "Oh shut up," He growled at Shadowpaw.

            "Wow that was mature," Shadowpaw retorted.

            "Yeah you know what else is mature? Go clean out the elders den." Falcondance hissed. The young black tom scowled at him and didnt budge. "Alright," Falcondance growled, "Dont listen to me. You wont be learning any hunting or fighting moves. I wont take you on a border patrol until you do." Shadowpaws mouth dropped.

            "You wouldnt! You have to train me. That way we can find the others sooner." Shadowpaw sounded like he thought he had an ace in the hole.

            "Oh really," Falcondance grinned, "To earn a warriors name you have to prove yourself but how can you do that without learning?" Shadowpaw growled deeply at his deputy. "Being my apprentice isnt going to be fun, easy or anything like that." Shadowpaws eyes opened wider, "No, your torture has just begun you little brat." Shadowpaws mouth dropped open at what Falcondance had called him.

            The deputy turned on his heel with a smug grin. "You cant do this!" Shadowpaw squeaked.

            "Oh? And who is going to stop me?" Falcondance chuckled. The young black tom bristled at his mentor and stormed off to the elders den. It wasnt going to be easy to tame the young cat but Falcondance was confident in his abilities. Shadowpaw would make a good warrior if he could stop arguing with those superior to him.



-- Edited by Ebonycloud at 00:20, 2008-11-16

-- Edited by Ebonycloud at 00:20, 2008-11-16

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Oooh, BURNNESS goin on here!

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Lolz
Falcondance as Shadowpaw's mentor
IT WAS MEANT TO BEEEEEEE~
I had a feeling Falcy would be Shadzie's mentory. xD

YOU LOVE TO TORTURE FALCY, NEH? :B


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Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Oh yesh!! I can be so evil to my characters! Just look how Ivory from original Streamclan turned out... Anyway i just thought that it would be so much more fun with these to constantly banntering back and forth XD

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Nai, it is fun. Nai, I want more torture-fun. >D

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
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And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Well i thought i had put part 11 up here but i suppose i hadnt! Well here is part 11 and th new part 12 up =D
Sorry that my font magically changes for a bit... my computer is being stupid -_-'

Part 11

           Goldpaw trudged beside her companions. Oddly enough, today Blackfox wasn't tormenting her by throwing his harassments at her. Instead he was padding in his usual odd way beside Eaglepaw. The young gray tom stared eagerly up at the Darkclan warrior and they were more than likely sharing witty remarks with one another to see who could insult the other the best. So far it seemed to be a draw. Goldpaw rolled her eyes and caught sight of Duskpaw who was almost intently listening in. Her pretty mouth quirked up in to a charming smile as she giggled to herself about something Eaglepaw had muttered to Blackfox.

            Goldpaw shook her head side to side and glanced forward. Ahead, Ebonypaw seemed intent on leading them and not looking back. He stared directly up where the star usually was. His gaze was as icy cold as ever. The young she cat frowned and stole a glance at the others in the group. Still they were content to be talking the rest of the day away. With a grin she sped up. It was easy to catch up to Ebonypaw on the open moor they were in. They had left the forest about a day ago and now were traveling in the open.

            "Ebonypaw?" she said quietly. If the black tom had heard her, he made no attempt to show it. She came along side him and gently flicked his side with her tail. His ice blue eyes snapped to her but remained impassive. Goldpaw's knitted her brows together and made a slight frown. "You dont have to be so grumpy." She looked forward, "I just wanted to know if you are alright."

            Out of the corner of her eye she saw a look of surprise on Ebonypaw's face. "Yes I suppose," He said softly. Goldpaw was happy to hear his sweet voice talking to her instead of hissing or growling. "Well, I am alright other than that filth we have along with us now." He growled a bit and glanced forward.

            "I know Blackfox isn't exactly what I want for company either but we are sort of stuck." She mewed softly. "Eaglepaw seems to be enjoying him quite a bit."

            "He would," The black tom frowned deeply.
            "Come on Ebonypaw. Don't say that. You know Eaglepaw is just a little rebellious." Goldpaw tilted her head to the side and gazed up at the tall young tom.

            "He should follow the code more. It would serve him better than waltzing about thinking he can do whatever he wants." Ebonypaw turned cold eyes over his shoulder and fixed the three cats behind them with his stare.

            Goldpaw rolled her eyes "Dont be like that. We all know that you believe the code is the answer to everything-,"

            "Because it is." He interrupted.

            "But some cats just dont see it that way. I know Eaglepaw really does respect the warrior code but he just needs a little time to completely understand it." Goldpaw murmured thoughtfully. Yet the dark apprentice only let out a snort as his reply.

            "Hey Goldy!" called the all too familiar rugged voice of Blackfox. The golden she cat cringed and oddly enough she saw Ebonypaw's whiskers quiver in amusement. "Why are you hanging around that boring lump of fur? Come back here! Its a party back here." A rough and uneven laugh caught up to her ears, making the she cat frown.

            "I don't have any intention of walking with you." She growled back.

            "Aw, come on Goldy." The black and white warrior whined. "You are making me sad. You would think that you stopped being in love with me and started falling for hotshot there." Goldpaw's fur bristled greatly and she whipped her head around and glared at him. Her blue eyes glowered at the dark tom. Yet he merely winked at her and oddly enough made a really weird gesture. He puckered his lips and made a sort of, chu, sound. Goldpaw tilted her head to the side and furrowed her brows.

            "By the way Goldy, this is the part where you race back here and slap me across the face." He giggled loudly. Yet Goldpaw was confused by what he had done. What exactly did that gesture mean?

            "Might I ask... what exactly was that you did? If this is the part where I slap you I am assuming it wasn't a nice thing." She frowned slightly and kept a steady pace with Ebonypaw. Blackfox grinned from ear to ear as he laughed.

            "It's called a kiss." He chuckled to himself as if it were some great joke.

            "A... kiss?" Goldpaw asked with a confused expression. Blackfox turned his golden eyes to the sky for a moment as if he had to think about it.

            "Well, actually I learned it from some rogues that I met on the edge of the territory." He started. Goldpaw bristled at the thought of talking to rogues. If Blackfox was any kind of clan cat he would have chased them off the territory. "They were talking to our deputy Littlewillow." Blackfox's eyes grew dreamy as he thought about Darkclan's she cat deputy. Goldpaw sneered at him but he took no notice. "She had quite the attitude that day, so one of them did what I just did. Littlewillow was confused but just left with the rest of the patrol. I stayed behind to ask what it was he had done. He told me it was something the twolegs did to one another to show either love or just to annoy the other. But I wonder... what was the motive behind my gesture?"

            Goldpaw growled at Blackfox's meaning. He wanted to confuse her by making her think he was really in love with her, yet the young apprentice wasn't an idiot. She knew he was only doing it to get on her nerves. If the Darkclan warrior had any feelings that were even related to love he would be sweet. He would be gentle, kind, and warm. Not obnoxious, loud, callous, rude and in every aspect, horrible. Yet Blackfox's charming smile pushed to the front of her mind making her think that he just might know how to be sweet.

            As she was lost in thought she didn't notice Blackfox saunter easily to her side and walk beside her. He watched her as she was in thought and without warning he licked her jaw and with a giggle he jumped away. Goldpaw let out a screech and chased after him. The black and white warrior laughed loudly as his long strides let him easily kept a good distance from the angry young she cat. But Goldpaw wasn't about ready to let him get away without a good beating.


           
Ebonypaw watched as the golden she cat disappeared in to the tall grass after Blackfox. He couldn't help the small smile that touched his lips at seeing her so flustered. He shook his head to shake away that feeling. He heard Blackfox's loud uneven laughter coming from a good distance away before it started growing closer. Ebonypaw knitted his brows as the laughter grew even closer. Out of the grass burst Blackfox. Ebonypaw gasped and right at the last second Blackfox leapt nimbly over the young tom, looking as if it was second nature.   

            From the bushes Goldpaw came crashing through. She gasped and tried to skid to a stop, but wound up blundering into Ebonypaw. They both crashed to the ground in a writhing mass of bristling fur and flailing legs. Ebonypaw growled, they finally stopped with him squashed into the ground with his face in the dirt and Goldpaw sprawled out on top of him. "Get off..." he hissed with a mouth full of dirt.

            "Well now," Came Blackfox's mocking laughter. "Haven't you two gotten closer?" Ebonypaw felt anger twist in his gut making knots of hatred. Goldpaw hastily jumped off of him with a look of shock on her face.

            "I am so sorry Ebonypaw!" She hopped to his side and sniffed him all over more than likely looking for any wounds.

            "Don't worry about me." He snorted. His ice blue eyes glared at the Darkclan warrior who still only brushed it off like he didn't care about Ebonypaw opinion. "What were you thinking, running around like that?" He hissed. "Didn't your mentor ever tell you to stay with the group?"

           "Aw, mom!" Blackfox whined like a kit, mocking Ebonypaw in every sense.

            Ebonypaw tensed and bared his teeth in a nasty snarl. "That's it!" He hissed and leapt in to a charge after Blackfox. Ebonypaw wanted to rip his throat out just to relieve his ears of the black and white cat's mocking laughter. As the apprentice grew closer the playful light in Blackfox's eyes died making him look very deadly. Ebonypaw's blood ran cold making him falter. He landed wrong so that he staggered awkwardly. A heavy blow to his shoulder knocked him aside easily. The black apprentice collapsed to the ground with an, oof!

            A heavy paw crashed in to his side making him cough and sputter. Ebonypaw's ice blue eyes stared up at the vicious face of the Darkclan warrior. His blood was as cold as ice when their eyes met. The hatred in the Blackfox's eyes made Ebonypaw freeze. His breathing stilled and his body tensed getting ready for the death blow. Blackfox lowered his face slowly and deliberately. "Listen hotshot. I really don't like you and I can see you don't like me. Blackfox's usually light uneven voice now sounded as smooth as silk and full of dripping poison. The perfect dark tone he talked in only made Ebonypaw's heart rate increase. With slow and hypnotic eyes, Blackfox continued in a low and dangerous voice, "But I have to tell you one thing. If you ever try to come at me like that again, I won't hesitate. You are one hundred years to young to even think about taking me on."

            Ebonypaw knew that Blackfox would carry through with his threat. It was backed up by what sounded like a harsh life. Just what kind of cat did they let in to their group?


Part 12

           Goldpaw felt like holes were being drilled in to the back of her head as the group padded together. Each of the apprentices had seen, except for of course Eaglepaw, what Blackfox had done. Now each of them padded a modest distance ahead of the dark warrior. Goldpaw cast a glance behind her to see the usual smile on Blackfoxs face. Yet for all of Blackfox's ability to cover up his feelings, she could still see the absolute disgust he held in his eyes. The deep gold pools were cold and unfeeling. She was used to seeing them twinkle and mock her, yet now they were closed off and hateful.

            Ebonypaw hadnt talked the whole time. Instead he made the greatest effort to act as though he was traveling alone. The black tom's ice blue eyes never once turned over his shoulder to make sure his companions were keeping up. Rather he kept his ears forward and his eyes trained on where the star in the sky was supposed to be. Goldpaw heard a short sigh come from Eaglepaw. It sounded like the gray apprentice really wanted to break the horrible silence they now traveled in. Goldpaw couldn't agree more with him. Yet something held her back. She didn't want to be the first to speak and she could tell that no one else wanted to else want to either.

            The older gray apprentice sneered and hissed, "Alright, I have had it! I my eyes dont work but my ears work perfectly fine, but by the way things have been happening I would think I as born deaf as well! Can we at least talk about the weather?" Goldpaw felt a smile creep across her face and noticed out of the corner of her eye, Duskpaw snickering to herself.

A rough voice sounded from behind them, "Well then, what about this weather? It sure is splendid I would think." The Darkclan warrior didn't wait for anyone to reply, rather he just prattled on like a gossiping elder, "The clouds are just beautiful, I think that one looks a flower. What do you think Eaglepaw?" Goldpaw cast a glance behind her to see Blackfox looking to the sky and pointing with his tail knowing full well that the apprentice was as blind as a bat. Eaglepaws gray fur bristled and a sarcastic smile sat upon his lips.

Eaglepaw lifted his face to the sky as if he really could see it, "Really? I thought that one looked like your fat head." Blackfox's laughter reached Goldpaw's ears sending chills up her spine. The laugh wasnt heavy. Rather it had regained the light hearted manner it usually had. She had expected him still be concealing his true emotions like he had been for a while now. Leave it up to Eaglepaw to cheer up the dark warrior by insulting him.

"Well I see the resemblance now. Thank you for pointing it out. My, that is a handsome cloud isnt it?" Blackfox teased the apprentice back. Goldpaw honestly didnt get their sense of humor. Why was insulting one another fun? She frowned slightly and looked forward. Ebonypaw still held an easy marching pace, never looking back.


         The cold night air whispered past Goldpaw's ears as she awoke from her light sleep. The stars blazed above her head making her feel almost lonely. Was Starclan still watching over them from these strange stars? The moor land the group had been traveling in was now drawing to a close as mountains rose above the five cats. Their brown craggy peaks had made everyone in the party a little wary. Before trying to ascend the barrier of land, they had stopped for a good night's sleep. Yet the golden Fireclan apprentice couldnt find dreams. No, she sat lying on her side with her head on her paws feeling a little odd.

She expected something to happen. Almost as if something was missing. She had woken up, check, looked around, check, slapped Blackfox... not check. Goldpaw glanced around waiting for the warrior to show up and taunt her, so she could chase him around. Yet he wasn't there. He was no where to be seen. Oddly enough Goldpaws heart constricted. Where was he? Worry gripped the young she cat and she had no idea why it did.

She stood from her sleeping place and lifted her muzzle to the air. There was no wind that night, only the stifling quiet of this chocking night. A large snore made Goldpaw jump. Eaglepaw was laying with his back legs tucked beside him in an uncaring way and his front paws crossed under his chin. A troubled look crossed the gray apprentice's face for a moment. She figured that he hadnt caught the mouse he had been chasing.

She padded away from their small camp site in search of Blackfox. Yet his scent was no where to be found. Almost as if he had never been with them. Goldpaw's blue eyes searched the tall grass around her, in an almost desperate way. She kept telling herself, 'Its not that I care about him. I just dont want Eaglepaw to be upset that his jousting buddy isnt around anymore. Thats right! Thats the only reason I am looking for this self absorbed, flirtatious pain in the neck.' She nodded convinced that she had convinced herself.

The grass around her began to get thinner as she crested a small hill. Sitting in the light of the moon was a cat, one that she almost didn't recognize. His fur was bathed in silver light, making him look more ghostly and forlorn than anything she had ever seen. Yet even with the silver washed fur, she saw an odd tuft of hair sticking up on his head. There was only one cat in the whole world that had a cowlick like that.

Blackfox stared up at the moon, as if he was searching for some answer from Starclan. Like he was waiting for a starry warrior to come and confront him. His golden eyes illuminated in the soft glow of the moon above. They were pained so greatly, as if he had committed the greatest of sins and now had to bear the weight alone. Goldpaw felt her chest constrict with emotion. She couldn't help that her paws glided forward toward him. She wanted to sooth that deep stinging pain.

The black and white tom's ears pricked. He whipped around and faced the Fireclan apprentice. Yet as their eyes met, Blackfox's eyes grew afraid. Despite the fear a burning passion crossed his face, a warm mask of love over took him. Goldpaw had never thought she would see such a deep emotion cross the toms face. His eyes looked like they wanted to tear up. Like he had seen the starry warrior he was waiting for. Hauntingly, he stood. His usual uncaring steps were placed down ever so delicately, almost like if he made any noise, the spirit he saw would disappear.

His approach made her tense and her eyes grew afraid. Blackfox stopped. His eyes that had looked hypnotic and warm, grew wide. The spirit he had seen must have disappeared. Now he saw the cat that was in front of him. A look of complete devastation crossed his eyes before he took hesitant steps backwards. Goldpaw whirled around. She had caused that look of grief and devastation and she knew it. What ever had been troubling the dark warrior, it would have been better if it had troubled him alone. She would not have caused such a painful look to come across his face. Goldpaw raced back the way she came. Unsure of why she cared so much. Nothing made sense now.





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Awwww poor Blacky!! *Huggles Blacky*
No kitty needs to be that way!
Super Twiggy is here to help! X3

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*hugs Goldpaw* Everything will make sense once it wants to. *glares at Blackfox* Am I the only one who doesn't like you because of your stupid attitude?

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
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Probably XD You are the only on e i think that doesnt like Blacky =3 Thats alright though XD Once you understand why he is like this you might like him... then again you might not X3

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Maybe... Maybe not. *giggles* He has an attitude almost eactly like mine, minus the extreme flirty stuff. So, that's why I don't like him... And he reminds me of my rival in school... Extremely a know-it-all, and loves to tease the heck outta me... That's also why, I believe.

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.

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