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Amourapaw


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July 20, 2009 7:07 PM Central Time

Wow. I just posted 2 minutes ago and now I need to post again but i'm too lazy to edit so I'm just going to post a new post XXD

I forgot to mention that I am going on a cruise to Mexico! =D
I'm so excited.
This is my first cruise ever.
And so this means this is my first experience!!! =D

This is so exciting XXD
Now..
buh-bye

Me no post in journal anymore for today.

Oh and me is going to go swimming soon =D
so BYE BYE~ <3

~Bellsie~

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Amourapaw


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BeLls' FriggiN AwESomE journAL -- Update on July 22!! [New Poem! PLEASE READDDD!!!]
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July 22, 2009 10:08 PM central time

I've decided that i will not open a new thread in the fan-fic for my poems, but to post my poems here. =D i made one.

I Need You

First.

Everything you ever said would

Repeat in my head.

I just cant get over the way you would say

My name.

It whisperes in my ear

Over and over again.

Im so confused.

I miss you.

 

 

Second.

Everything you said is stupid.

I dont give a darn what you think.

Youre off by a million,

Im not the right one for you.

I dont know what I fell for

In your puny little body

That happens to be

The body of the head

Football captain at our high

School.

I have you.

 

 

Third.

You have such beautiful eyes.

So different from others.

Its green one day,

Then silver,

Then blue.

I love them.

I miss you.

 

 

Fourth.

I cant believe you would ever cheat

On me.

I cant believe

That I believed you were the right

One for me.

You never cared about me, never

Loved me, never asked

If I was okay when I was hurt.

Such an excuse for a

Boyfriend.

I hate you.

 

 

Last.

I want you to know that I love you,

That I need you in my life.

No matter what, youd always be

My one love.

I need you.

*note* this isn't te actual version. PM me if u want the real one =D*

Please post and coment! Thanks!!! =D



-- Edited by Bells on Thursday 23rd of July 2009 06:23:09 PM

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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That was amazing. I really loved it. The stuff you siad is so true and it really hit hard. :heartss: Congrats :]
HOWEVER, *cough* the d-word's not allowed x33 You can replace it with "darn" or something similar so that the poem still makes sense but leave a note at the bottom saying this is the censored version and they can PM you for the real one :]

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Amourapaw


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mmkay =D
thanka mooney =D
it means a lot to me.

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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you are superr welcomee :]

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July 22, 2009 7:37 PM Central Time

Hey!
I just wanted to drop on by and say hi. [XD]
I'm pretty bored.
Anyways,
I got Super Smash Bro Brawl for the Wii. It's amazingly fun, even for a girl! [XD Well, for me actually. I never expected that I'd like it but yes, it's FUNN!] Try and buy it, it only goes for the Wii I think. I know Super Smash Bro goes on a loottt of game systems though! [I THINK XD]

Here is a NEW POEM I wrote. I hope it works out right.. It's crammed into my mind and I need to put it somewhere [in my journal online, actually XD] so.. I'll be editing it and editing it after I finish typing it. XXD


No More

I used to think
that you were right.
Perfect just for me.

But now that I'm standing
here in the rain,
I know how stupid I can be.

You love me,
You love her.
You kiss me,
You kiss her.

Is this really right?
Is this worth a fight?

Now I'm here with no more love,
Crying my heard out
Like a baby dove.

I don't know how you won my heart
And how you won my soul,
But I know I have done my part.

You love me,
You love her.
You kiss me,
You kiss her.

Is this really right?
Is this worth a fight?

The rain is pouring down,
I'm out without protection.
I'm slithering onto the ground.

Now I know what I have to do,
I go to your door.
I knock, you open,
I whisper, "No More."

*Author's Note ((Bell's Note XXD)) :: This is a poem made of fiction. This didn't happen that the author knows of, it's a complete work of fiction.
It's about a girl who loves her boyfriend, but her boyfriend loves another girl. She realizes that her life is not supposed to be with him, so she leaves him with the words, "No more."*

Please leave a comment! =D
<3 Bells

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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The rain is pouring down,
I'm out without protection.
I'm slithering onto the ground.

That's my favorite line. heart.gif
It's so deep, it hits the core feeling of suffering.

Now I know what I have to do

It's just the emotion of doing what's best for her. She loves him and it will break her heart like he's already done, and to leave him is almost unqestionable. But she knows she has to do it. That's why this line somehow struck me.

This whole poem is full of lust, suffering, and doing the best thing for yourself.
I love this.
It is pure brilliance.

p.s.
I love Super Smash Bros Brawl :D I kick butt with Sonic! And Pit's hot.. x33

-- Edited by Moonstar on Friday 24th of July 2009 06:32:22 AM

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LOL! =D
Thanks for the awesome comments mooneh! =D It really means a looot to me! =D

I'm awesome at Link and Zelda/Sheik. But my brother still beats me on it. He's sooo goooooodddd XXD

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Florestadream


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i want a wii... ;-; hahaha! :3

moi's fave part?

"I don't know how you won my heart
And how you won my soul,
But I know I have done my part."

i agree all the way with moonie. :3 hahah! me loves this. probably because i can ultimately relate to this poem in a way i never thought i could relate to something... well, actually, i relate to a lot of things... and... i should shut up now because i'm rambling... hahah!

and that whole fiasco that your poem is based on... that happened to me. hahaha! :3 he said, "i think we shud just b friends" and i said, "alright, no more." and yes, i know i just wrote in computer talk but that's because sam is a big enough butt-head to break up with me through text message. so the next day my friend and went and kicked his butt... hahaha! and ever since he did that, he's had REALLY bad luck... hahaha! :3 and once again, i shall shut up.

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.
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Amourapaw


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LOL! =D

Thanks starry =D it's ur new nick name =DDDD
It means a lot to me to say that you like my poems =D A LOOOT =D
so thanks again!

and wiis are REALLY FUN =D You should try and get one. but they're kinda expensive still

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
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