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TOPIC: Valley of Cats~Chapter 6 up! PLEASE COMMENT TO KEEP CHAPTERS COMING!
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Valley of Cats~Chapter 6 up! PLEASE COMMENT TO KEEP CHAPTERS COMING!


These are little stories I come up with. These take place in medieval times with a royal family that has the ability to turn into cats. Please comment. Here are the characters. King Arhtur; Role: King, Age: 46, Personality: wise, kind, loving, supportive, great fighter, fatherly aura about him. Appearance:King Arthur Cat form: large, brown tiger with white chest. Queen Milora; Role: Queen, Age: 46, Personality: kind, sweet, gentle, motherly. Appearance: Queen of Hearts Cat form: snow leopard with brown eyes. Prince Hudson; Role: oldest son of king & queen, oldest prince, Age: 18, Personality: quiet, calm, protective of his younger brothers (especially Frank.) Appearance: Anime Logan oe Cat form: brown leopard with brown eyes & only three whiskers on his left side. Prince Stephan; Role: young prince, Age: 16, Personality: prankster, almost always happy. Appearance: A blonde manboy to be used in rps of romance Cat form: black & white house cat with green eyes. Prince Ken; Role: younger prince, Age: 15, Personality: wise cracking prankster, sarcastic, fun loving, always happy. Appearance: Anime Boy with Blue Eyes George Cat form: brown tiger with blue eyes. Prince Frank; Role: youngest prince, Age: 14, Personality: quiet, calm, likes having fun with his brothers, avoids fights when he can, acts slightly childish. Appearance: Neko boy Cat form: small, black panther cub with bright blue eyes. Now for the evil dog royal family. King Roger (Row-gur); Role: king of the dogs, Age: 46, Personality: cold hearted, only cares for his family, always planning the demise of the cats, especially wants Frank. Appearance: apologia.jpg Dog form: huge black wolf with empty black eyes. Queen Elizabeth; Role: queen of the dogs, Age: 45, Personality: her high shrill voice adds to her pickiness, better than any one else attitude & hates cats. Appearance: Elf with scabourd Dog form: over groomed poodle with black eyes. Prince Scrappy; Role: oldest prince, Age: 20, Personality: nicer than Roger but hates cats. Appearance: blonde hair anime boy Dog form: well built golden retreiver with ice blue eyes. Princess Poofy; Role: only princess, Age: 19, Personality: like her mother, pumpus, prissy. Appearance: anime girl with black hair Dog form: prissy yorkie with brown eyes. Prince Chewy; Role: youngest prince, Age: 18, Personality: evil sense of humor, like torturing cats. Appearance: brown hair eyes anime boy Dog form: brownish golden retriever with insane blue eyes.
These are the "extras" Nurse Lily; Role: Royal Nurse, Age: 47, Personality: kind, gentle, motherly, doesn't tollerate fooling around in her medical den. Appearance:Cynthia Maguire Cat Form: light yellow lioness. Jenny; Role: best friend of Frank, Age: 13 1/2, Personality: very smart, bit of a bookworm, kind, caring. Appearance: Brown_Haired_Girl_by_Jpex25.jpg Cat Form: brown tabby.
















-- Edited by Freeflare at 22:10, 2008-11-23

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RE: Valley of Cats


Ooh, purr~dy characters, Free! ;3

Can't wait for you to start writing! :D

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And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Thanx Night aww! Hope you guys like the stories. Frank looked out his window watching the parade of cat knights coming towards his family's castle. He smiled at them & waved. The knights smiled & waved back, the castle's mote door lowered welcoming them in. Frank ran down stairs & accidentally ran into Ken, Frank fell down & looked up at his his much taller brother. "Hey what's the hurry bro?" Ken asked helping him up."The knights are here!" he exclaimed excitedly, his tail swishing showing his happiness. "Cool, lets go see!" Ken said running ahead of Frank. Frank smiled widely showing his fangs & ran after him. When they reached the bottom of the stairs the knights were riding in on their beautiful horses. "I'm gonna be in there someday." Ken said puffing out his chest. Frank lifted an eyebrow at him & returned to gazing at the knights.

-- Edited by Freeflare at 16:18, 2008-10-09

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After the knights presented themselves to the king it was time for the feast. "Tell me, how did the battle go?" King Arthur asked his head knight. "Fantastic! Your highness." the knight replied extatically as he took a drumstick. "What did I miss?" Hudson asked as he sat down next to his brothers. Frank jumped up to his brother, "Hudson!" "How was it being a knight?" Stephan & Ken asked together. "It was okay." Hudson replied hugging Frank. Queen Milora stood up, "Your attention please." Everyone went silent & looked up at the queen. "We would like to thank all of our brave & valliant knights on a battle well fought. Now enjoy the feast!" Arthur raised his goblet to the crowd & sat back down. Everyone started eating their food & chatting to one another, families were together again & everyone was smiling. Frank let go of Hudson & sat back down. Hudson smiled & sat next to him. Ken & Stephan bumbarded Hudson with questions about the battle. Suddenly Frank's cat ears perked up, his smile faded from his normally bright face. A flaming rock crashed through the large stained glass window behind the royal family. Everyone scrambled away & started running. "Everyone to the underground refuge!" Arthur shouted over the roaring fire & screaming. Everyone ran to the shelters with the royal family. But what they didn't see was Frank laying on the ground, he had been knocked out by flying debri. "This way!" a low gruff voice commanded as it moved towards where Frank was. Frank stirred & opened his eyes. His vision tried to focuse. He looked at the shattered stain glass window. Outside he saw a large threatening figure standing on a huge rock. Roger turned towards Frank & looked directly at him. Frank's face, even though it was cut & scratched, showed how terrified he was.

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this is a gr8 idea freeflare!!!!!!! :)))))

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Thx, Timber! :) Roger loomed over to the small boy with cat ears & a tail. "Your majesty." Roger said in a mocking voice & did a clumsy bow. Frank's ears pressed flat against his head. He looked up at the lumbering figure standing before him. Roger noticed the cat-boy's bleeding left side. He smirked & put his heavy boot on Frank's stomach. Frank winced & tried to push the boot off. Roger laughed at the boy's struggling & took his boot of him. He circled the boy examining him with interest. "Wait, where's Frank?!" Hudson frantically searched the crowd for his raven haired brother. Frank whimpered in fear & pain. Roger chuckled when he heard Frank's pathetic whimpering. Roger stepped over to Frank's wound & kicked his side. Frank screamed as the huge boot made contact with his side sending a seering fire-like pain through out his body. Roger quickly poured a grey liquid into Frank's mouth. Frank sputtered & choked, trying to spit out the foul tasting liquid. Hudson rushed in to the burning castle seeing Roger standing above his brother. Roger looked at Hudson & smiled evily. He snapped his fingers & Roger disappeared in a whisp of smoke. Hudson ran to his brother's aid. All Frank could see were dark shapes, he slowly slipped out of consciousness. Hudson scooped Frank up & carried him to the medicine den in th refuge.Medicine cats den Crystal cave clan

-- Edited by Freeflare at 21:34, 2008-10-21

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"Frank!!" Milora ran up to Hudson & looked at her youngest son with worried gaze. Arthur rushed up next to Milora, "What happened?" "I don't know." Hudson had worry on his face too as looked down at the small, limp figure in his arms. A nurse came running out of the den & looked at Frank, "Oh dear, quickly bring him in here." she ordered as she went back into the den. Hudson carried Frank into the den & gently put him down on an empty bed. The nurse quickly went to work on Frank's wounds.Ken came in with Stephan. "Is he okay?" Stephan looked at Frank with concern. "I don't know yet." she said as she bandaged Frank's side with care. Milora came in & knelt down next to Frank & gently stroked his cheek. After the nurse shooed every one out of the den she returned to Frank's cuts. When she was done she turned out the lanterns & left Frank to sleep. Frank remained still with an uncomfortable look on his face.

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Roger stormed into a large dark castle, "CHEWY!!!" "Comingcomingcoming!" Chewy ran towards the stairs, he tripped & fell down the stairs. He landed at his father's feet. He stood up & sulloted Roger, "Prince Chewy at your disposal sir." Roger rolled his eyes, "My plan has succeded! Tell the cook to prepare the feast!" Chewy sulloted him again licking his lips & ran to the kitchen. "What's all the excitement darling?" Elizabeth came down the stairs & stood next to Roger. "My plan worked my dear. Soon the child will be able to bare it no longer & come to us for the antidote. And he will be under my control!" Frank gasped & opened his eyes. Seeing that he was in the medical den & Roger was nowhere to be found he relaxed. Hudson came in & sat down next to Frank on his bed. "Feeling better?" Frank nodded & looked at the small box his brother was holding. "This is for you. And so are those." Hudson pointed to a pile of boxes. He handed Frank the box he was holding. Frank smiled & opened it, inside was a book with hand drawn pictures of the battle Hudson had fought in.

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"Hey need some help with those?" Ken asked eaber to see what was in the colorfully wrapped parsals. Stephan snagged a package & so did Ken. Frank nodded & motioned to them to sit down with him. Ken sat down on the left side of Frank's bed & started ripping the wrappings off the box he was holding. Stephan plopped down on the right side & did the same. A FEW HOURS LATER......Hudson was helping Frank put his wooden horse together. Stephan was looking at the drawing book Hudson gave Frank. Ken was flailing his arms about with Frank's new wooden sword in hand. The nurse came in the den & gasped at the mess. Frank laughed. "Well at least some one's feeling better. You can go outside & play with your friends now." Frank jumped out of his bed & ran out of the den. The nurse leaned over to Hudson & whispered "You best keep an eye on him." Hudson nodded & smiled. He ran after Frank. The nurse turned to Ken & Stephan. "You two...out now." "Yes ma'am." "By the way if you're wondering if you'll see us again soon." They looked at each other "Probably." they said together as they ran out the den. The nurse shook her head.

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Frank sat down on the ground & started to play with his new wooden horse. His friend Jenny came up to him & sat down. "Hi Frank!" Frank waved shyly at her. "'Oy look at that." Ken whispered & tugged on Hudson's arm. Hudson looked at Frank & Jenny, he smiled & chuckled abit. Frank suddenly reached up & scratched his back vigorously. "Are you okay?" Jenny asked as she watched his intense itching.Frank shook his head & put his arms around his stomach. Jenny got up & ran towards Hudson. "Prince Hudson, something's wrong with Frank!" Hudson made a concerned face & went over to Frank. Frank was crunched over on the ground holding his stomach. Hudson carefully scooped Frank up in his arms. Frank was sweating & he was shaking. Tears streamed down his face as he grew sharp talons on his hands & feet. "Oh great cat, no." Hudson held Frank closer as he continued to change.

-- Edited by Freeflare at 17:06, 2008-11-23

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