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Moonstar


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♥~Moonstar's Poetry~♥ -New poem 4/13/09-
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Sanity
I cant take another golden smile, choose her instead
Come on sweetie; please just empty out my head
Packed to the rim with your unrestricted fibs
Slipping out of this choking collar thats strapped to the leash in your fist

Youre a stubborn, ignorant, horribly handsome award
But the requirements youre charging, I just cant afford
The tears that rip down my cheeks show my untamable affection
Your flaws are what make you disgustingly perfect

The unique echoes of my screams I cant resubmit
They are only audible to me but I dont really give a shoot
It better look like I dont care about what the heck goes on
Because hiding the truth is almost impossible for this stupid girl

Come to your senses
But wait, wait
Will this action soak up instant regret or fate?
Wondering whether to accept the gemstone or not

Its unbearably terrifying to make up my mind
But it has to be done eventually over time
And with a deep gaze into your sparkling eyes, your loyalty somehow shines through
The way you smile so naturally at me
Your eyes gleaming
Your voice tender
I come to my senses


-- Edited by Moonstar on Sunday 7th of June 2009 06:04:32 AM

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Florestadream


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I really like the choice of title for this one; it shows the undecided, and then the choices you make, and the sacrafices you have to give. It has nice descriptions, and is very smoothly running, like one of those little streams people have in their backyards. xD Anyways, I really like this poem too, Moony! I've replied to basically all your poems. I hope I don't bother you.

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.
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Moonstar


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Oh no, of COURSE you're not bothering me. And thanks again for the detailed comment!
Yup, undecided.. heart.gif
Thank you soooo much!!! ^^

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Amourapaw


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wow mooneh! wat a poem! you really describe stuff pretty much in detail, that's why i love reading your poems! =)

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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Thanks soo much Timbersong! :DD

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your welcome mooneh! =) it's not a supprise your poetry tread is still active, it's great! =)

XD i was thinking of the tiger in the corn flakes thingy where he goes THERE GRRREAT! XD

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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Hahahaha, thanks!! XDD

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Amourapaw


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hehe XD =) i'm quite random XD

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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Sincerity

Cant intervene, wish I could

This just doesnt feel right

Guess its my fault all along

For letting you and her ignite

Drowned in my fear

Couldnt swim

Things had gotten out of hand

But years later

Looking back

Its not as easy to understand

 

And what seemed like the world would end without

You barely remember; so many years

And what wed been seeking all our life

Is now right beside us, calming our fear

And when life seemed to shatter beneath our feet

We fell, but werent broken

Never sincere

We conquered our tears

We made it here

 

Swallowed heart, hide the tears

Someone please just hold me close

Guess Id better move on

Leave you alone, I suppose

I created my suffering

Unknowingly, unfortunately

Wish that I could turn around

Waiting till later

Much later, when Ill pick those

Broken pieces off the ground

 

And what seemed like the world would end without

You barely remember; so many years

And what wed been seeking all our life

Is now right beside us, calming our fear

And when life seemed to shatter beneath our feet

We fell, but werent broken

Never sincere

We conquered our tears

We made it here

 

Cause God is always near

His hand reaches down to wipe our tears

His love consumes us, kills our fear

Always sincere

Always sincere

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One of the best things I've written, probably.
Almost like a song, huh?
And I love the message,
What message did YOU recieve from this poem?
Tell me please. COMMENT!



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Duskstar


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Beautiful poem x3 The message I received? Well, I'd say, always stand strong, there's someone looking after you. Not necessarily God. Not for me anyway. But someone. x3

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"If he dies, then it will be God's will."

"If that was meant to be comforting, it was not."

"Everyone dies eventually. Once you are born, you begin to die."

"That was not comforting either!"

"It is the way of the Creed. Usually our deaths are violent but quick."

"Old man, are you trying to provoke me?"

-Stolen from a fanfic~-
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