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Moonstar


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dreamless (i'm lying)
by mooon

Green grass like the color of your eyes
It flattens against my back as (I) look up
And in the night I always feel better
(L)ike theres not so much to be done
But theres a lot to be thought
Like why seeing a full m(o)on on black fabric makes my heart jump
A little extra
And why seeing your face and teeth without braces makes my heart jump
A little more than that
And why the hands on the clock are still moving
When I am not.

Sometimes I think that the tiny blades of grass I love
Can compare to your timid hands that I wish
Would wrap comfortably around my waist
Like they did on the last day of February oh, nine
Hundred things I can recall in (v)iolet light
And though that night was the best of my life
I cant help but realize if Im not apart of yours
Then that day isnt, (e)ither.

( Y)ou and I know that Robert gets mad
And thats okay because I am just
Telling the truth like you never did
Which is better than lying to the one you love anyway
Even if it makes Robert a little madder than before.

The grass tickles my tummy which is going up and down
Like yours does, too, because I watch it
But that is also (o)kay because your tummy is calming when it goes up and down
And I hope yours keeps going up and down
For a long, long time
Or at least until after you leave me
So that I will never know
What happened after you left
And we both know what happened before.

Because sometimes you
Have to end it even though
You love the haik(u).
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i love this.
read carefully, there are soem interesting things hidden in here.
do comment. <33
please. :]

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lemon drops and sugar candy.
by moonie

The best days I can remember somewhere include
Your beautiful eyes
And my ginger fingertips jump roping through
That hair that I love even when
Its in pieces on cornflower tiles of the corner barber shop
And the best days float in my ocean like sea glass
They are glittery
And I fetch them over and over
Because I like the way they feel
Smooth in my palm
And the edges only cut me
When I am trying too hard or
Not trying hard enough.

Reoccurring postcard evenings
Are full of cheddar
In my green eyes that like
To look at you sometimes
But I still kind of love your sandy laugh
When you are waiting by the carved dock
Solid and waiting to be sat and kissed on
And your eyes are the color of the sea glass
In my mind and they are good things
But I only just noticed.

I do like these dahlias in my happy fingers
That you have given me
On the solid dock that we are sitting on
And my heart is jumping like my
Double Dutch fingers stroking your hair that
Is melted against your face
Because I know what comes next
And I am anxious because
This is only my third time
And I am eager because
You are a tempting boy
Especially in the cherry blossom sunset.

But once I am relaxed like you always were
You whisper words to me
You whisper words that make my heart
Skip the beat
And I trip over my ropes that were swinging as my fingers
Stop caressing your auburn little hairs
And my eyes are greener than yours
As you fail to explain your stumbling syllables
And your logic is ridiculous
As I am walking away
And my feet just know where to go.

The sea glass of the best day
Folds in my paper palm which is open
And I only got hurt because I was
Trying too hard or
Not trying hard enough
And looking into your dripping eyes
Is not an option
Even though they are my favorite.
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my intentions are anorexic (and i am reminded)
by moonstarr.

(i)My hollow piggy bank is glass and I have no more dimes to
Give you for your unopened lies
In tiny forbidden envelopes that just cant seem to
Escape from my doorstep
But I do not want to unwrap them
Because I like to be reminded on a daily basis of how you left me.

(m)I guess I wont block those seven fragile digits just yet
As long as you promise to consistently send me your faultless details
That leave me a little red-faced, a little red-eyed
And a little read-all-over as the maraschino cherry on top
In a small dish on a flat and breakable Baskin Robins table
And I suppose Ill eat alone.

(i)She is the type of beautiful girl that seems to fit
Oh so perfectly in the oh nine of days
And the oh eights are reserved for me
So maybe Ill wait
Ill sit on this porch and wait for my oh eights
Because the oh tens are already taken.

(sx2)Its three o clock in the afternoon and my laundry basket suddenly seems like
A lovely place to find that shirt that you kissed me in but
Look, the mailman has arrived
And his grubby hands toss more [black]mail
With your address in the corner and your handwriting feels out of place
Like (you).


-- Edited by Moonstar on Saturday 27th of June 2009 07:52:15 PM

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kamerad (i surrender).
by moonstar

x.
i thought it best that you know by now
that Im not coming back
and your strawberry sentences and procrastination
will do just fine
on their own for just one time without
a helpless little girl caged in your arms
as time ticks away counterclockwise minutes
and everything is spinning in circles.

xo.
i used to love the way your lips said
'rebecca'
because sometimes, if you were just close enough
the delicate butterscotch aroma would linger
in my nostrils and my bitter eyes would trace
your syrupy movements
as your feet bounced about the pancakes
and I would count off the number of times in a week
i could get you to whisper my name.

xox.
i hate the way you look at her
with your sour eyes
more than i hate myself
for loving your head even when its in the clouds
and you can't shed the snakeskin
of your past that is
scratchy against your alluring frown
and if i tell you to stop tempting me,
i can say 'good boy'
and give you a pat on that dreamless head i love.

xoxo.
they say honesty is what keeps a relationship together
so the truth is
i want to trace your ribcage in the thin outline of
fossilized sunsets
and feel the burst of that sweet citrusy breath
against my freckled nose that
misses your butterbrickle fingertips.
and now that i've gotten that off my chest
you should stop looking at mine.
'good boy.'
[i know what you really want]

and in my infinite heartbeats that rupture my desires
i keep remembering your caramel voice that
lulled me to sleep
that i only fell into because
i knew you were there
and once i woke up
i realized that i had fallen
for nothing.
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kamerad means 'to surrender' ;]

-- Edited by Moonstar on Saturday 27th of June 2009 09:02:54 PM

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aww! I love the poem, "Dreamless".

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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thank you so much! :D means a looot.

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^^ i still don't believe how well you make poems. they're so.. real =)

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
Moonstar


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Wow, thank you :))
I appreciate that so much.

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kamerad is amazing and describes your emotions very well; je t'aime, 'kamerad'! :3 and i understand it, too. :] very well put together!

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.
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Moonstar


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Thank you very supeerr much, I really appreciate :]
kamerad is one of my favorites xDD

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