Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Shatterstep · ShadowClan Medicine Cat

RE: 'Venting' Poems by flamepelt *New poem up about This warrior cats forum! first post*

Karma · Loner

OMG its your sig! Thats so cool! thanx for requesting I was dying to write a poem! Anymore requests?

Shatterstep · ShadowClan Medicine Cat

Of Course it is. I must put it on display. ^^ It really is good.

Karma · Loner

Thats awesome! So any requests?

Rosetail · WindClan Warrior

Awesome! =) I love your poems, especially the rhymes. You've got talent, Flamepelt! ^-^

Karma · Loner

Thanx so much! Now, I know these are definatly not my best work so far, but this poem thread is about venting, hense the title. so these two poems are about the same thing, some of the lines are similar.So here they are:

Fun is an illusion
I read down a list, a list of my grades
Most of which result in A's
A single blemish holds my despise
A D+ on a quiz, now thats a surprise
As soon as her eyes lay sight on this grade
She has decided, my future is made
No 'Great job!' for the A's, just an 'I'm disapointed' for the D
All good deeds forgotten, for one casualty
Maddening tears of anger and confusion
No more fun for me, now fun's an illusion

Special Quest
I try my hardest, I study for tests
All because of my special Quest
To impress my parents, to have a good future
All this to build a healthy structure
My good deeds are soon forgotten, with still no sign of regret
Every rare mistake seems to take years to forget
So here I weep in my bed today
All for one mistake, and here I shall prey

-- Edited by Flamepelt at 20:49, 2008-11-11