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TOPIC: Timberpaw's Quest ~ Part 2 up!!! ~


ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

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Timberpaw's Quest ~ Part 2 up!!! ~


Here are the members of the story:

Part 1=2nd post on page 1
Part 2=4th post on page 1
Leader:
Poppystar [F] A light brown she-cat with a white underbelly, blue-green eyes, and a silverish cresent-shaped moon on the tip of her head.

Deputy:
Talonleaf [M] A dark ginger tom cat with icy blue eyes, black legs and tail, and a brown line going down his back.

Medicine Cat:
Stormwing [M] A gray-black tom with brown eyes and a black spec on the tip of his nose.
Lilypaw [F] A brown tabby she-cat with green eyes and a white tail.

Warriors:
Roseleaf [F] A fluffy ginger tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes.
Mountainblaze [M] a silverish blue tom with pale blue eyes and black stripes going down his body.
Sootheart [M] A gray colored tom with brown eyes.
Daisychain [F] A pale yellow she-cat with green eyes and black ears.
Stripefur [M] A gray tabby tom with a lot of stripes going down his back.

Apprentices:
Timberpaw [F] A silver tabby she-cat with sky blue eyes and white paws.
Dawnpaw [F] A brown she cat with brown eyes and black ears.
Cinnamonpaw [F] A ginger brown she-cat with dark brown eyes.
Streampaw [M] A black tom with green eyes and little white specks.

Queens:
Featherleaf [F] A silver-gray she-cat with green eyes and black paws.
Dreamcloud [F] A grayish white she-cat with dark blue eyes and fuzzy fur.

Kits:
Bubblekit [F] A happy ginger tabby she-cat with peircing green eyes and jet black paws.
Berrykit [F] A blackish brown tabby she-cat with emerald green eyes and jet black paws.
Cloudkit [M] A fluffy white tom with light blue eyes a silverish tail.

(I made up most charecters so please don't mind if i used your name)

-- Edited by Timber at 02:51, 2008-12-21

-- Edited by Timber at 23:27, 2008-12-21

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once again, start smiling.
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ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

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RE: Timberpaw's Quest


Part one up!!!! =D It's kinda long.... XD XD n_n

Timberpaw turned in her uneasy sleep. Dreams scared her, and she was having one, a very bad one.
"If you don't find it, your loved one will die!" hissed a dark black tom. Timberpaw stepped back a few steps.
"Find what?" she asked, worriedly.
"That's the point!" The black tom howled like a heyena. "You don't know!" Timberpaw shivvered.
"Please, tell me!" she begged. The beautiful tabby was close to tears. She didn't want to lose anyone.
"Go through the mountains and find the stone. Give it to me before 9 moons, and your clan will be safe. If not, someone will die!" The tom laughed again.
"Okay..." Timberpaw's voice trailed off.
"Find it, you'll be safe. If not, your clan gets harmed. Chose one!" Slowly, the tom disapeared, leaving Timberpaw alone.
"Help me get home!" She wailed to anyone who could hear her. "Please-"

"Timberpaw! Timberpaw!" hissed Cinnamonpaw, Timberpaw's best friend. "Your making a racket!"
"Huh?" Timberpaw asked groggily. "What'cha say?" Cinnamonpaw laughed.
"Your making a racket! Hitting me, too!" Cinnamonpaw repeated.
"Oh..." Timberpaw said absentmindedly. She was still focusing on the dream. It seemed so real!!!
"What's wrong?" Timberpaw's best friend asked. "You seem like you a mile away!" She giggled. Timberpaw flinched. Her friend's theory was a little close, and she didn't want anyone to know about the nightmare yet, not even her closest friends!
"What's wrong?" Cinnamonpaw asked again.
"Oh, I uh... was just daydreaming..." Timberpaw said quickly. She shook her head. "I guess I'm not fully awake yet!" She laughed. "C'mon Cinnamonpaw. I guess it's time to start our training!" She got to her paws and started walking to the middle of the MoonClan camp. Her ginger-like friend followed her.
"Ya, I'm pretty sure Daisychain is waiting for me," Cinnamonpaw dissmessed herself. "I'll seeya later, bye!"
"Okay, bye!" Timberpaw yelled back. She headed toward Roseleaf, her mentor. She was on the big rock warriors used to make themself warm. Most of the time the sun was shining there.
"Hey Roseleaf, I'm ready to start my lessons today!" Timberpaw called a bit too enthustiasticly. She didn't want anyone to know her mind was away, either, and she was always bad at lying.
"All right!" Roseleaf jumped off the rock. "Where do you want to go first?"
"How about Lightning River? There must be some prey there!" Timberpaw yelled back. Lightning River was a zig-zag river that was a border-line between MoonClan and RainClan. Most prey scuffled there because it was near water.
"Okay. We'll catch prey, then move onto protecting yourself!" Roseleaf answered. Timberpaw became excited. It was her (and Cinnamonpaw's) 5th moon of training. She always loved learning new protecting moves.
"Okay!" Timberpaw said. "Race ya to the Lightning River!" She laughed. The tabby almost always raced her mentor to places they would train, Roseleaf said it helps pick up speed.
"Ready, set, go!" the ginger tabby yelled. Withen a split second, the two she-cats ran off into the woods.


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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 



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RE: Timberpaw's Quest ~ Part 1 up!!! ~


I loved your story! good job!

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RE: Timberpaw's Quest ~ Part 2 up!!! ~


Thanks Flame! =D =D

Part 2 up! Kinda Long.... again XXD


When Roseleaf and Timberpaw got to Lightning River, the sun was high. The very little dew on some leaves shone brightly as the sun slowly evaporated it up. Timberpaw sighed.
"This place is so beautiful!" The silver tabby whispered. Everything fit perfectly together in the scene. The sun shining on everything, the trees among the river, the plants and animals, even the river seemed to be best friends with the rest of the living things.
"Yes, it is!" Roseleaf agreed. Her eyes shone enthustiascticlly. "But now, we're going to hunt! First one to catch 5 prey wins!" Timberpaw sighed. Her way to hyper mentor always made lessons into games, some were fun, some were not.
"Okay," Timberpaw finally gave in. "Ready, set, GO!!!" Timberpaw shot off toward the river, her nose led her there. Underneath the colorful leaves, the silver tabby could hear scuffling of animal's footsteps. Slowly creeping toward what Timberpaw figured out was a shrew, she flung herself into the air. When the shrew finally knew it was in danger, it was too late. Timberpaw flung the almost-dead shrew in the air and bit it in the neck. Filled with saticfaction, the tabby burried her prey in the ground.
The hunt was going well for Roseleaf, too. She caught a mouse already and the fluffy cat was going for a squirrel. The big-tailed creature was gathering nuts for the up-coming winter and was clearly not paying attention the the world around him. Roseleaf squated into the Hunter's Crouch and crept forward.
"I better get this..." she mumbled to herself. This was an easy catch and would never hear the end of it if she missed. The ginger tabby was close enough to the squirrel to pounce, but squirrels were fast.
"I'll go a bit more closer," she whispered. "Then fling!" She crept forward 3 paw-steps and the froze. The squirrel scensed something. She sighed in relief when the mouse-brained creature went back to gathering nuts. In a flash, Roseleaf pounced and bit the squirrel dead.
"Two prey, three left!" she said satisfied.

"Roseleaf!!! I got FIVE prey!!!!" Timberpaw yelled to her mentor. Roseleaf shook her head. The silver tabby was so loud sometimes! But still, so cute!
"Okay, lemme see!" Rosetail called back. She walked toward her apprentice.
"See??? I caught a shrew, 2 mice, a thrush, and a squirrel!" Timberpaw said proudly. "What'cha catch?"
"3 mice and a squirrel. I was just about to catch another mouce when you yelled so loudly and scared it away!" Roseleaf said, trying to sound stern, but couldn't do it because of the twinkle in her eyes. Timberpaw giggled.
"Sorry," she said. "I got too excited!" Roseleaf smiled.
"No need to say sorry!" she replied. "Lets go to camp and drop these off. I'm hungry, so lets eat while we're at camp. What do ya say?" Roseleaf asked.
"Perfect!" Timberpaw smacked her lips. "I'm on it!!"


__________________
darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 

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