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Lilyspirit


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This is really awesome! Exept... erm... the way you said "come" to make it shorter in Chapter three is actually a really inapropriate word. Could you please change it? x3

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Thank you moony!! xDD

And Lily, thanks for telling me, I didn't know. o_o;

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