Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Nice. Once again, lotsa KHiness -- which I absolutely LOVE. And it's still kind of confusing... but I'm getting an idea of what's going on. :P
And that riddle at the end was... unnerving. I hope you did that on purpose; if so, you should start doing that more. :P

Though, as I've brought up in the past, I would suggest getting more into description, especially if you plan on publishing this and your other stories as a series of books in the future. Right now it's just a whole buncha dialogue -- and, while interesting, dialogue =/= book. Just a friendly little something to consider. :)

1/28
I've been very lazy recently. I should fix that. I also think that journals are getting boring, so I will...add a bit to mine. XD
So I've been working on this picture all day of an awesome character to my story. I Completed him in 6th period, my last period of the day. But when I completed him, he came to life. Seriously! He jumped off the page and started running around. There was mass panic. People started sceaming and stuff. It would've been really funny, if it wasn't a crazy very powerful demon that likes to burn things.
Okay, so maybe I should describe this guy. He is pretty awesome to look at.
First off, his name's Firestorm. He's THE Major Spark Pup. Meaning, he's the most powerful Abyssal Knight (AKA, Servant of an Abyssal Demon) that serves Kazzer the Abyssal Demon of the Flame. He's all black...well, not exactly. He's got these glowing red-orange, jagged stripes (looks like the cracks you'd see in a rock if it started to bleed magma).His head kinda resembles that of a ram's with the curly horns. He has no eyes, but he DOES  have eyesockets. Sometimes flames would shoot from these empty sockets. Same with his nose which always had smoke streaming from it. Firestorm's arms are pretty normal up until just before the wrist. There, everything is seperated.  He's got a hand with two fingers and a thumb. The fingers are seperated from the hand and the claws are seperated from the fingers. Its only in three different sections (His legs are insane though O.o). He has no teeth unless you want to count the two tusks he's got on his lower jaw. His body's all one piece, not counting the wierd floating spikes going down his back. Those are for controlling electricity (That's right, he can control electricity XD). He's got a short tail too. You know what, lets just say he looks like Agumon's long lost evil, demonic, brother or cousin...OR MAYBE HE'S HIS DAD!! O.o
Firestorm: "Agumon, I am your father!"
Agumon: "NOOOOOOOO!!!!"
Those wierd spikes he has are all wavy. They start just above his forehead and go all the way down to his tail where he's got four of these odd spikes floating around the tip. He's got a couple more below his chin.
Now for the legs. Okay, pay attention. These are very difficult to explain. In fact, i'll describe them very briefly. They are....seperatedinto13piecesincludingallthreetalons!
Okay, done. XD Now back to the story.
So here's my amazing creation, wrecking havoc in my English class. We were supposed to watch this movie about a guy who got sent back in time to 1822, but this is far more interesting. People usually don't think short people are very scary. People who know me know this is not true. Why do I bring this up? Because, Firestorm's only 3 feet tall. Yes, that's right. 3 feet tall. A very powerful demon, and only 3 feet tall. So, why are people afraid of him? He's an Abyssal Knight of the Flame, and , like fire, grows as long as he's got food. Fire needs oxygen to stay alive, Abyssal Knights of the Flame use oxygen to grow rapidly (when they want/need to). And, since this is at school, there is plenty of paper and other flammable objects around.
To make a long story short, Firestorm devoured anything within reach. He himself did not grow, but those stripes he had began to shoot flames. He was now literally on fire.
People are now really flipping out and running around while Firestorm is calmly eating random things, setting stuff on fire, and occasionally shooting bolts of lightning. School gets out in 5 minutes and I want to go home. But I can't get just leave a demon at school, so I order Firestorm to get back on the piece of paper. Being an all powerful demon, he decides he doesn't want to return back the sheet of paper.
The thing about fire is that its always hungry, and the demons are no different. I pull out what I still had left in my lunch box and used it to lure Firestorm back to the paper (It took a bit since Firestorm is pretty smart. He knew what I wanted him to do, and he deifinitely did not want to become 2D again).
Before Firestorm changed back into just a plain old drawing again, I had him fix everything (Yes, he can unburn stuff. He's that cool XD).
And that's the end of today's adventure. Maybe something more interesting will happen tomorrow. Adios for now.
--The Amazingly Epic Genius, Rekktor
(Yes, I will be signing with this title because it makes me sound cool XD)

PS.
Yes my story will be continued. But I will warn you, there is no order for it. It will be jumping randomly all over the place. Why? My brain is really wierd and it works better if I do this instead of trying to write it in order. Don't worry, I won't suddenly jump to the last chapter. That wouldn't be any fun. I will save the fun stuff for later....And I will let you know if something comes before/after something else.

-- Edited by Dragonstar on Friday 29th of January 2010 04:54:42 AM

I wish all my creations came to life too. It would be so cool!

And here is Firestorm!

He's the completed guy in the middle. The rest are parts for other Spark Pups and the Minor Spark Pup, Frostbite. Those black spots above his head are not a part of him, but the non shaded ones are. I also shaded in some parts of him so that I didn't get confused, like his legs and hands.

And yes, that movie is about slavery. I believe its called Brother Future.

-- Edited by Dragonstar on Friday 29th of January 2010 10:44:59 PM

-- Edited by Dragonstar on Friday 29th of January 2010 10:46:52 PM

2/1
Yeah, so the Grammys were last night. Don't know if you guys noticed. And Saturday Night Live came on during it. I have to say, I was far more entertained with SNL than the Grammys. Why? Because Payton Manning was flipping hialrious. XD
He was in this skit that was basically a spoof of those NFL "spend time with your kids" commercials. Very funny. At first, it looks like one of those commercials. Up until Manning pegs one of those kids with the football, tells him he sucks, and then has him stay in a portapotty for the rest of the skit. Yes, that's exactly what he did. Throughout the rest of this skit, Manning continues to hit kids with the football and tell the how terrible they are at this sport. Sounds bad, but trust me, its really funny.
I'm pretty sure they used this one trick that the Daily Show used. This trick is to bleep out a word (any word. John Stewart took some guys speech and started editing out random words and it really did sound like he was swearing in those beeps), and that's it. Its not like they're going to have Manning use swear words in front of a bunch of little 8 year old kids.....or maybe they did. O.o
There was more to SNL, but I don't really feel like going on about it.
Just a warning to everyone who is on the younger side, you may need permission to watch this show (not the Grammys, Saturday Night Live).

And now for a bonus.
A chapter of Memories FROM THE FUTURE!! XD

Rekktor pounded on the wall with her fists. The whole cave shook with each blow, but the wall remained standing.
"I don't know if you've noticed, but hitting it isn't working," Blake said.
"Can it, furball. I can feel it giving in."
"It's solid rock."
"Both of you shut up! Rekk, stop hitting the wall. It's clearly not working."
The orange leon turned around and glared at the two humans.
"If you've got a better idea, tell us now. We're not going anywhere," Blake grinned.
Rekktor growled and took a step towards the brown haired human. Blake jumped to his feet and quickly changed into his demon form. The two glared at each other  until Todd stepped between them. He too had taken on his demon form. Being the Ox, he took up about a quarter of the total space in the small, square room.
Blake shrugged sat down with his back against the wall. The black panther looked up at the only torch which was attached to the wall.
"How much oxygen is that thing eating up?"
"Hhow much do we have?" Rekktor asked.
They looked at Todd hoping he would have an answer.
"Hard to say. Talking and hitting walls probably used up a bit. For all I know, the flames my use less than we're using," he said.
"Should we put it out?" Blake asked.
"We need the light right now."
Blake sighed and watched his tail flick. Todd signalled to Rekktor to check the walls. Rekktor looked up at the ceiling, grabbed the torch, and climbed the wall. Blake got up and began to look around for an exit as well. Todd approached the wall Rekktor had beat on. It looked untouched.
The Ox Weapons Master summoned a large war hammer and swung as hard as he could at the wall. Once again, the room shook, but there was no sign of that any damage had been done.
"Do that again!"
"This isn't a time for games, Rekk," Blake growled.
"Just hit the wall again!"
Blake shrugged and Todd swung the hammer again.
They looked up at the leon again. Rekktor ran in circles on the ceiling a couple times before dropping down.
"Careful with that torch!" cried Blake.
Rekktor ignored him.
"I don't think we're still in the caverns," she said.
"Why not," Todd asked.
"When you hit the wall, the whole thing shook and kinda swayed."
"What do you mean swayed?" Blake's ears perked up.
"Like a building would during an earthquake."
"The walls aren't attached to anything," Todd said quietly to himself. "Check out the base of these walls, see if there's a crack or anything."
Rekktor handed the torch over to Blake and began to study the bottom of the walls. It wasn't long before she had found something. A small straight line that circled around the entire room.
"So the walls aren't connected to the floor, nice find... Now what?" Blake asked.
Todd bellowed and charged at the wall. The room tilted and light seeped in from a gap between the wall and ground. Unfortunately, Todd's charge wasn't enough to knock the room down and it fell back into place. Todd rubbed his shoulder.
"I'm going to try it again. After I hit it, you guys come in and hit again. One at a time," he said.
The other two nodded and the Ox warrior charged again. Just before the room started to fall backwards, Rekktor struck it. Blake charged in right after her. Again, it didn't seem to be enough.
"We're never gonna get out!" Blake cried.
"You're so blind," Rekktor laughed.
Before Blake could say anything, Todd walked over to the opposite wall and began to lift it. Someone had placed a rock under the wall before it could fall back. Todd wasn't the only one lifting the wall, a couple others on the opposite side were lifting as well.
Eventually, the entire room fell over. Slaviks watched the trio curiously as they stepped off the rock platform that had been the floor of the room.
"Free at last!" Blake lept ahead of Rekktor and Todd and handed the still burning torch over to one of the snake people. "You can have it," he said.
"Where are we?" Todd asked one of the Slaviks.
"Tera'kor, the largest city on Zipe," it replied.
"Now that's odd," Rekktor looked over at Todd. "Those caverns were deep underground on Hyrbrid II."
"So Fleshripper not only trapped us in a magic box of doom, but teleported us to Zipe as well?" Blake shifted back into his human form. "Does he want us dead or not?"
"He eats his victims, remember? He probably wanted to save us for later," Todd said.
"We'd better hurry back, Bor's all alone with a crazy, blood thirsty demon."
Rekktor growled and slashed the air with her sharp talons. A gate opened where the claws had slashed.
"There's no way you can gate hop from one planet to another without a ship," Blake backed away from the portal.
Todd grabbed him and began to head through the gate.
"Draigar was right, you guys are suicidal! All this for a guy who doesn't even exist?"
"Zi does exist!" Rekktor snarled.
"If he exists, than why hasn't anyone ever heard of him?"
"Because he's being smart and staying low!"
Blake fell silent when Todd spoke. The ugly scars that were scattered all over the Ox's body stood out more when he had shouted. Rekktor looked down.
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Never remember, never forget....
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"Let's go," she said.
Todd dropped Blake and followed the leon through the gate. Blake stood up and dusted himself off.
"If only the Replik's had listened," he said to himself.

-- The Amazingly Epic Genius, Rekktor

PS.
Yes, I'll write about that crazy story soon. I believe I came up with that one a couple years ago....yeah, 8th or 9th grade. It'll be written wierdly since it happened before this story begins, but it is semi important.

PPS.
Did I really confuse you guys?