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TOPIC: The Chronilces of Zilioaun****CHAPters 3,4,5,6,7,8,9 UP!!!pwease read and comment please.****
Venomheart


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?????? What a thing to say :(

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The fact is my literature skill surpasses this. ANd there are so many grammatical errors DX

I revamped the story so much (But not by much) and it is a lot better. (And it makes a heck of a lot more sense.)

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Well yes there is grammar problems but hey its not TOO bad

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