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TOPIC: Holly Shadows- HOLLY SHADOWS HAS BEEN COMPLETED!


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RE: Holly Shadows- Angelic or Sinner? SINNFULL WOLF CROME CAPTURED! XD THREE SPOTS OPEN!! ACTIVE!
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Cloudandis drifted into her thoughts, the unconscious illusion of the world vanishing. SHe felt...odd. As if something was...with her. She opened her eyes to a pitch black world. She stared into the darkness and saw Reela. "I wish you and Rach could forgive me....."She whispered. She was just wishfully thinking. Reela was dead. But she may as well play along with her insanity. "What would you have done...if you were me?"Cloudandis asked what she thought was just an illusion of Reela in her head.

Holly stared at Cloudandis again. He shrunk back in shock for a few moments. Her eyes were completely white, no pupils, no nothing. Mabe he was just immaginging it. If somethign had happened to her, why was she still floating in the air as if she was awake? He turned his thoughts away. "Must've really been hungry...her eyes are just..."and he flew, drifting beside her.

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Rach didn't notice Cloudandis. He turned away from his cousin, who had a hurt look in his eyes. Rach had to say something to Ruba. "Well, now we both know what it's like to lose someone that meant so much to us," he whispered, and nudged Ruba softly. His cousin smiled.
"Yeah, I guess." They flew on for a while, and Rach could see the mountain in the distance. He looked back. Everyone was getting tired. He turned his eyes toward the ground. It wasn't safe there, but they couldn't keep flying. Trees? Maybe. He'd have to have a watch. He turned to face his pack.
"Stop everyone!" he commanded. "We'll rest in that cluster of trees there for the night. We'll have to set a watch. I'll go first," he said.

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Holly tried to stop Cloudandis, and managed to hold her back whilst looking like he was just flying in front of her, as if she had stopped. Yet she was flapping her wings, as if still flying forewards with the group. Luckily, he held her back. She was unconsciously staring at Rach, who was calling for them to stop. In her mind, she saw Reela sitting, her tail over her paws. She looked like a metawolf from the Angelic pack. Cloudandis's misty figure slid over to her, wanting to know why she wouldn't answer the question. She heard Rach's call, but was still in the blackened world with Reela. Reela looked incredibly miserable, yet...she had this tone to herself, as if in understanding regret she knew something. Cloudandis wavered there. This was an illusion right? So why wouldn't the halucination of Reela say what she was thinking, what she knew? Why didn't she say,"Rach is right"Or"Cloudandis, even if you had saved me it would have been too late. I would've died in front of Rach." or,"Your avoiding him will just make matters worse." ? Why wouldn't that illusion say her thoughts? Unless, she knew Cloudandis already expected those stinging and Scornfull words?

In the waking world, Holly was still holding Cloudandis back, whilst waiting for another order from Rach, and wanting to know if they were to land. He didn't like having to do so many things at one time. If Rach told him to let Cloudandis land, she would streak off forewards through the air like a speeding bullet and they wouldn't e able to catch up. Already, pressure was building and he was fighting harder to look normal while keeping this crazy metawolf from escaping like a ballon in the wind. His thoughts were racing. What if Rach did say that? What if he refused and just floated there, pressure building up like a dormant volcano becoming fragily active?! Cloudandis would rush past Rach or crash into him, and it would look like she was trying to start a fight with him. What were the whites of her eyes and were all that shown stared Rach down, and the way it looked, someone could've mistaken her for challenging the alpha of the pack.

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Rach forced himself to look at Cloudandis, and saw her eyes, pure white, and Holly trying to pull her back. Fear suddenly filled him. "Please pack, we'll catch up with up, go," he barked, making his way to his beta, Ruba at his side. "Cloudandis?" he asked, nudging her. He hoped that she was okay. What would he do without her? He hoped desperately that she would wake up. Tears filled his eyes and he didn't try to hold back. "Cloudandis, wake!" he ordered, but without the slight intimidating tone in his voice that he usually used when giving an order.

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Holly couldn't hold her back any longer. He fell to the ground as Cloudandis shot straight past him-for a tree. She burst right through it, leaving splinters to fly about. But this slowed her, and she was hovering forewards yet again, unaware of Rach's call. Holly was now leading her back to Rach. He figured if she could semiconsciously float, he could lead her forewards. He spoke to Rach with a shaking tone. "Rach, I didn't want you to get the wrong idea-if I had let her go straight towards you, you would have ended up like that tree."He told Rach. "I don't know what happened but lets try to get her out of it. Lets see if we can land."He said. ALmost as soon as he said it, Cloudandis folded her wings aqnd landed on all fours with out much effort. She was now walking slowly forewards. Holly followed after her, and heard her speak,"Reela, what would you do if you were me? I asked you once, so why can't you answer?"and her voice was as unearthly as a specture, ghostly.

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OOC: um...yah right >_>* you two post more than any one else and if you keep going no one else can post.also cloudandis you put to much pressure or attention on your self and jaggedpine you have to many things related to characters.


IC: crome floated for a second smiling at the fight that just passed."they'll rip each other apart and every one will be to angry or sad to keep tabs on me.' he sead quietly to him self. then folding his wings tightly agenst his body he dived strait vertical. he enjoyed thrill, action and fighting. five feet above the ground he leveled out and landed hard.as the dust cleared he emerged and sneezed.after his fit of sneezing he laffed. he enjoyed the situation he was in."you are the most pitiful group of wolves i ever saw! ive could have handled that beater than all of you. did you ever tried consulting with the guard, and if that failed why didn't you just use the cover of trees to your advantage instead of flying in open air ware you can't see your enemy but thay can see you."still smiling he sat down and eyed every one."and did you ever think of useing the meta wolf tears?"

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ooc: ??? Okay, sorry about that. I'm not Cloudy, I'm Scorchheart....?????? =\

ic: Holly flew after Crome, glaring at him. "Oh would you just shut your mouth! Those are non of you buissness, so stay out of it! You have no right to patronize our pack!"He scornfully shouted. He flew at Crome, spiralling and sent him into the ground. He picked him up and threw him forewards. "Don't you ever disrespect The Angelic pack!" he snarled.

Cloudandis had still stared at Reela when she heard shouting. Reela turned to her. "THere is a fight. Mabe you and Rach could dispers it?"she said. Then she vanished and Cloudandis woke in the living world. She saw Crome and Holly in a fight. Holly looked really mad, so Crome must have done something. She flew over to him with no more effort than a bird. "What happened Holly? What did you or Crome do?"She asked.

SHe just didn't like Crome. He was getting a little out of controle. "He disrespected our leader and our pack! He asked why we just didn't use the wolf tears...and why should we tell him?"he answered in an angry tone. Cloudandis saw Rach's hurt look. What else had happened? "Crome, we didn't use the wolf tears because they wouldn't have worked in that situation. And you will not show disrespect to our pack, even if it's just because you belong to a different one."Cloudandis said, answering Cromes question.

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Rach slammed Crome to the ground and pinned him there. "You will never, get it? NEVER question the power and intelligence of my pack again! Do you understand?" he snarled, digging angry claws into his flesh. "You stupid boy! What do you know about anything?" He had fresh anger and enough hurt from Reela's death to be meaner and more intimidating than ever before. He snapped his jaws and left a gash on his shoulder.

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Cloudandis put her paw on Rach's muzzle. "Rach, let's just let him off. I can't say I know at all how you feel, but something tells me this will do no good."Cloudandis said. She couldn't understand what ha happened earlyer. "Holly, I think we may have to switch who watches Crome. Rach, what do you think?"she asked, her calm tone shocking Holly. How on earth had she been so calm, even when Rach was yelling at her, even now?! It was just not normal. But he stood next to ZRach. He called Ruba over. "Ruba, do you know how to break this fight up?"he asked in a pleading voice.

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Ruba padded over to his cousin. "Rach please," he barked. "Get off him. It's not like he's going anywhere after we're done with him." Rach whirled and glared at Ruba. His eyes flickered from his cousin to Cloudandis to Holly, but stopped on his beta.
"In case you haven't noticed, I'm perfectly capable of holding the watch tonight," he growled. He slowly stood, but still kept a paw on Crome. When he lifted it off, he poised himself to catch him if he ran.

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